1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-08-20 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 blood doners 내 용 Today I will talk about Sweden's blood donating. When a person donate blood to another people, the message come from hospital because their blood safe one people. Sweden's people like this message. There is type of blood. A,B,AB,O,A negative,O positive. We can donate a same type of blood to that people. Everyone can't donate blood. Only no disease or healthy people's blood. I think who donate blood is very kind. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-08-26 답변내용 Today I will talk about Sweden's blood donating. ===> Good sentence! When a person donate blood to another people, the message come from hospital because their blood safe one people. ===> When a person donates blood to another people, the hospital will send a message to the person to inform that he/she had saved someone.  Sweden's people like this message. ===> Good sentence! There is type of blood. A,B,AB,O,A negative,O positive. ===> These are the types of blood: A,B,AB,O,A negative, and O positive. We can donate a same type of blood to that people. ===> We can donate the same type of blood to that people.  Everyone can't donate blood. ====> Good sentence! Only no disease or healthy people's blood. ====> Only those who have no diseases or have clean blood.  I think who donate blood is very kind. ===> I think a person who donates blood is kind. Hi Daniel! Thank you for sharing about the article. You were able to construct good sentences. But, slips were still made with subject-verb agreement. Hope to hear from you again! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella