1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-08-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 first black principal dancer 내 용 Today I will talk about one woman. She is African American. Her name is Misty Copeland. She started ballet late but she was good at ballet. She started at 13 years old. Misty Copeland have a free dance classes on a basketball. Copeland's family is leave at motel. They life was very hard. When black people dance at the stage, people thought that black ruined the stage. Copeland break obstacles. I think she is very good at ballet 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-08-25 답변내용 Today I will talk about one woman. ====> Today I will talk about a woman.  She is African American. ====> She is an African-American. Her name is Misty Copeland. She started ballet late but she was good at ballet. She started at 13 years old. ====> Good sentences!  Misty Copeland have a free dance classes on a basketball. ====> Misty Copeland had free dance classes on a basketball court.  Copeland's family is leave at motel. ====> Copeland’s family lived in a motel. They life was very hard. ====> Their life was very hard. When black people dance at the stage, people thought that black ruined the stage. ====> When black people dance on the stage, people thought that they ruin the stage. Copeland break obstacles. ====> Copeland breaks obstacles.  I think she is very good at ballet ====> I think she is very good at ballet. Hi Daniel! Thank you for sharing about the article. Sentences were good, but slips were observed with verbs. Hope to hear from you again! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella