1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-08-12 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Ulysses 7 내 용 Ulysses fell asleep on the king's ship. WHen they reached his island, the sailors carried him to the beach. At that moment, Poseidon surfed by in his chariot. Poseidon punished them because they help Ulysses. Finally Ulysses aproached his island. The godess Athene will help him to meet his family. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-08-20 답변내용 Ulysses fell asleep on the king's ship. =====> Good sentence! WHen they reached his island, the sailors carried him to the beach. =====> Correct! Just be mindful of the capitalization. :) At that moment, Poseidon surfed by in his chariot. =====> Right! Poseidon punished them because they help Ulysses. =====> Poseidon punished them because they helped Ulysses. Finally Ulysses aproached his island. =====> Finally, Ulysses reached his island. The godess Athene will help him to meet his family. =====> Don't forget the correct spelling of "goddess". :) Hi Daniel! Thank you for continuing the story. You were able to construct good sentences. However, be mindful of capitalization and spelling. Hope to hear the next chapter! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella