1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-08-10 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Ulysses 6 내 용 The man terrified and rowed away from scylla as fast as they could. Then a giant wave flooded the ship and all the men drowned except Ulysses. Ulysses clung to the broken mast and somehow reached the shore. Next morning, a princess found him collapsed the sand. She took him to see her father the king. Ulysses told the king about his adventures. The king promise that he will help him 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-08-20 답변내용 The man terrified and rowed away from scylla as fast as they could. =====> The man was terrified and rowed away from Scylla as fast as they could. Then a giant wave flooded the ship and all the men drowned except Ulysses. =====> Then a giant wave flooded the ship and all men drowned except for Ulysses. Ulysses clung to the broken mast and somehow reached the shore. =====> Correct! Next morning, a princess found him collapsed the sand. =====> The next morning, a princess found him on the shore, unconscious. She took him to see her father the king. =====> Good sentence! Just don't forget your punctuation marks. :) =====> She took him to see her father, the king. Ulysses told the king about his adventures. =====> Right! The king promise that he will help him =====> The king promised that he will help him. Hi Daniel! Thank you for continuing the story. The sentence arrangements were good, just few slips with articles and punctuation marks. Hope to hear the next chapter! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella