1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-08-07 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Ulysses 5 내 용 When they thought they are safe, they unflugged their ears and they untied Ulysses. There was very huge swirling whirlpool. They row for their lives but there was another monter. It was scylla. That monster eat people so only Ulysses safe and everyone died. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-08-08 답변내용 When they thought they are safe, they unflugged their ears and they untied Ulysses. ====> When they thought that they are safe, they unplugged their ears and they untied Ulysses. There was very huge swirling whirlpool. ====> Good sentence! They row for their lives but there was another monter. ====> They row for their lives but there was another monster. It was scylla. ===> It was Scylla. That monster eat people so only Ulysses safe and everyone died. ====> That monster eats people so only Ulysses survived and everyone died. Hi Daniel! Thank you for continuing the story. Your grammar slips were with spelling, capitalization and verbs. Therefore, review the corrections. Try to add your opinions to better practice your English skills. Yours Truly, Teacher Bella