1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-07-23 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Hercules 11 내 용 The next task is go and find the tree of the Hesperides and take three of its golden apples. When Hercules went to island, there was a Atlas. He is held up the sky. When Hercules meet Atlas, he said only he can pick up the apple so Hercules have to held up the sky and Atlas pick up the golden apples but Atlas tried to take a golden apple and go. Hercules say before going, please held a sky for me because I have to change a position. When Atlas held up the sky, Hercules just go. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-07-24 답변내용 The next task is go and find the tree of the Hesperides and take three of its golden apples. ====> The next task is to find the tree of the Hesperides and take three of its golden apples.  When Hercules went to island, there was a Atlas. ===> When Hercules went to the island, there was Atlas.  He is held up the sky. ====> He held up the sky. When Hercules meet Atlas, he said only he can pick up the apple so Hercules have to held up the sky and Atlas pick up the golden apples but Atlas tried to take a golden apple and go. ===> When Hercules meet Atlas, he said only he can pick up the apple so Hercules have to hold up the sky and Atlas pick up the golden apples but Atlas tried to take the golden apples and go.  Hercules say before going, please held a sky for me because I have to change a position. ===> Hercules said before going, “Please held the sky for me because I have to change my position.”  When Atlas held up the sky, Hercules just go. ===> Good sentence! Hi Daniel! Do you know the story why Atlas is holding up the sky? Thank you for continuing Hercules’s adventure. There were few slips with verbs and articles. Therefore, review the corrections. Hope to hear from you again! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella