1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-07-22 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Hercules 10 내 용 Next task is catch oger's cow. oger's name is geryon. When Hercules find Geryon, Hercules use a water lily chariot. It is Helios chariot. When Hercules arrive island, Hercules spotted the ogre and his cows. Hercules shot a poison arrow. Herculeses fired his arrow, sending it right through all three bodies and Hercules get oger's cow. I think Hercules is good at arrow shoting. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-07-23 답변내용 Next task is catch oger's cow. => Next task is catching ogre’s cow.  oger's name is geryon. => The ogre's name is Geryon. [Remember to capitalize the first letter of names.]  When Hercules find Geryon, Hercules use a water lily chariot. => When Hercules finds Geryon, he used a water lily chariot.  It is Helios chariot. => Good sentence! When Hercules arrive island, Hercules spotted the ogre and his cows. => When Hercules arrives in the island, Hercules spotted the ogre and his cows.  Hercules shot a poison arrow. => Good sentence! Herculeses fired his arrow, sending it right through all three bodies and Hercules get oger's cow. => Hercules’s fired his arrow, sending it right through all three bodies. Then, Hercules got the ogre’s cow. I think Hercules is good at arrow shoting. => I think Hercules is good at shooting arrows. Hi Daniel! Are you good at shooting arrows too like Hercules? I want to try that. Most of your slips were noted with verbs. Thus, review the corrections. By the way, is this the end of Hercules's adventure? Yours Truly, Teacher Bella