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The next task is take a horses of king Diomedes. This is also dangerous because horses can eat people. When Hercules went to Diomedes palace, Diomedes seem friendly but Hercules know that Diomeedes plans to kill them and give to a horses. Hercules take a horses but Diomeedes came but Diomeedes is no match. Hercules kill them and give to a horses. I think Hercules is very smart and I'm curious that how he can know that Diomeedes is trick Hercules.
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The next task is take a horses of king Diomedes. ===> The next task is to take horses from King Diomedes. This is also dangerous because horses can eat people. ===> Good sentence! When Hercules went to Diomedes palace, Diomedes seem friendly but Hercules know that Diomeedes plans to kill them and give to a horses. ====> When Hercules went to Diomedes¡¯ palace. He seems friendly but Hercules knows that Diomedes¡¯ plans to kill them and give to horses. Hercules take a horses but Diomeedes came but Diomeedes is no match. ====> Hercules takes the horses but Diomedes came. However, he is no match to Hercules. Hercules kill them and give to a horses. ====> Hercules killed him and gave to horses. I think Hercules is very smart and I'm curious that how he can know that Diomeedes is trick Hercules. ====> I think Hercules is very smart. But, I'm curious how he knew Diomedes tricked him. Hi Daniel! Thank you for continuing the Hercules¡¯ adventure. The construction of sentences was good. However, there were still slips with verb tenses. Hope to hear the next story! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella