1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-07-17 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Hercules 7 내 용 Next task is go and catch the wild and white bull. White bull can breath fire. Hercules need a lion's skin. Hercules meet the bull. Hercules tried to creep up on it, the bull saw him and charged. When bull breath fire, Hercules guard the fire. He use lion's skin. Hercules knock a bull. I think Hercules is very strong. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-07-17 답변내용 Dear bella I want a sleep. => I want to sleep. Next task is go and catch the wild and white bull. => The next task is to go and catch the wild and white bull. White bull can breath fire. => White bulls can breathe fire. Hercules need a lion's skin. => Hercules needs a lion’s skin. Hercules meet the bull. => Hercules meets the bull.  Hercules tried to creep up on it, the bull saw him and charged. => Hercules tried to creep up on it, but the bull saw him and charged at him.  When bull breath fire, Hercules guard the fire. => When the bull breathed fire, Hercules guards the fire. He use lion's skin. => He uses lion's skin.  Hercules knock a bull. => Hercules knocked the bull.  I think Hercules is very strong. => Good sentence! Hi Daniel! The grammar slips were observed with verbs. Thus, review the corrections. But, the arrangement of words in the sentences was good. Hope to hear from you again! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella