1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-07-16 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Hercules 6 내 용 The next task is to kill the wild birld. It eat people so Hercules have to need a help so Hercules have Athene's help. Athene give him a rattle. Its sound is very louge and noisy. When he use rattle when birld is front, birld fly away so Hercules use a arrow to cath wild birld. I think Hercules heard a rattle's sound one more time, I think he become deafen. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-07-16 답변내용 The next task is to kill the wild birld. => The next task is to kill the wild bird.  It eat people so Hercules have to need a help so Hercules have Athene's help. => It eats people, so Hercules needs help. He asked help from Athena. Athene give him a rattle. => Athena gave him a rattle.  Its sound is very louge and noisy. => Its sound is very loud and noisy. When he use rattle when birld is front, birld fly away so Hercules use a arrow to cath wild birld. => When the bird was in front of him, he used the rattle. The bird flew away, so Hercules used an arrow to catch the wild bird. I think Hercules heard a rattle's sound one more time, I think he become deafen. => I think if Hercules heard a rattle's sound one more time, he might be deaf. Hi Daniel! What a funny comment you have. Thank you for sharing the next adventure. Most of your slips include misspelling and conditional sentences. Review the corrections. Hope to hear from you again! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella