1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-07-13 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Hercules 3 내 용 Now Hercules have to kill hydra. Hydra is very strong. It have 9 had. When Hercules going to kill hydra, he meet godness Athene. The hydra's breath is very poisionous so she said a sniff of poision will kill Hercules so hold your breath. When he meet hydra, Hercules hit hydra with mighty blow but when one had was died, another two had appeared so hercules use firely spear. When one had died, he use spear and ignite to hydra's head. I think he is very smart. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-07-14 답변내용 Now Hercules have to kill hydra. ====> Now Hercules has to kill the Hydra.  Hydra is very strong. ====> Good sentence! It have 9 had. ====> It have 9 heads.  When Hercules going to kill hydra, he meet godness Athene. ====> When Hercules was going to kill the Hydra, he met goddess Athena.  The hydra's breath is very poisionous so she said a sniff of poision will kill Hercules so hold your breath. =====> The hydra's breath is very poisonous so she said a sniff of poison will kill Hercules. Therefore, he needs to hold his breath.  When he meet hydra, Hercules hit hydra with mighty blow but when one had was died, another two had appeared so hercules use firely spear. ====> When he met the Hydra, Hercules hit it with a mighty blow. But when one head died, two heads appeared so Hercules used the fiery spear.  When one had died, he use spear and ignite to hydra's head. ===> When one head died, he used the spear and ignited the Hydra's head.  I think he is very smart. =====> Good sentence! Hi Daniel! I think you grew fond of Hercules? Is he your favorite Greek god? I am glad that you used good and appropriate words. But, check your spelling. Few slips were noted with verb tenses. Therefore, review the corrections. Hope to hear the next adventure of Hercules! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella