1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-07-04 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Hercules 2 내 용 The second tasks is killing a very strong and huge, tough lion. When Hercules met lion, Hercules stab him with a sharp sword but lion sking was to tough so sharp sword is broken. I think it is impossible. Hercules was surprised and he attak lion with a club. Lion was stunned. When Hercules is taking lion, lion woke up and attak hercules. When they fight a hour, the fight become finish. Hercules win and take a lion and show god. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-07-14 답변내용 The second tasks is killing a very strong and huge, tough lion. ======> The second task is killing a very strong, huge and tough lion.  When Hercules met lion, Hercules stab him with a sharp sword but lion sking was to tough so sharp sword is broken. =====> When Hercules met the lion, he stabbed him with a sharp sword but the lion’s skin was tough, so the sharp sword broke.  I think it is impossible. =====> Good sentence!  Hercules was surprised and he attak lion with a club. ====> Hercules was surprised so he attacked the lion with a club.  Lion was stunned. =====> The lion was stunned. When Hercules is taking lion, lion woke up and attak hercules. ======> When Hercules was carrying the lion, it woke up and attacked him.  When they fight a hour, the fight become finish. =======> They fought for an hour. Hercules win and take a lion and show god. =======> Hercules won and took the lion to the gods. Hi Daniel! Thank you for continuing the story. It seems like you like Hercules. Have you watched the movie? I like that movie. Try to watch it if you have time. Most of your slips were with verb tenses. Therefore, practice more with verb tenses. Hope to hear from you again! Yours Truly, Teacher Bella