1 school 2017-11-14 2 league of legend 2017-11-11 3 The largest chocolate bar 2017-11-07 4 changing academy 2017-11-04 5 micheal phelps vs great white shark 2017-08-24 6 kakao talk 2017-08-10 7 youtube 2017-08-06 8 league of legend 2017-08-01 9 Haikyu 2017-07-20 10 school uniform 2017-06-11 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 이승문 작성일 2015-07-03 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Hercules 내 용 Today I will talk about what did he did in past. Hercules is very strong so all of the god and godess was love him but Hera was jealous of Hercules. Hera cast a evil spell to Hercules so Hercules kill his wife and son. Hercules begg a forgivness to god but god say he have to do 12 tasks to have a forginess. I think 12 tasks will very hard to suceed. 답변자 ts0047 답변일 2015-07-14 답변내용 Today I will talk about what did he did in past. =====> Today, I will talk about what he did in the past. Hercules is very strong so all of the god and godess was love him but Hera was jealous of Hercules. ====> Hercules is very strong, so all of the gods and goddesses love him but Hera was jealous of him. Hera cast a evil spell to Hercules so Hercules kill his wife and son. =====> Hera casts an evil spell to Hercules so he killed his wife and son. Hercules begg a forgivness to god but god say he have to do 12 tasks to have a forginess. ====> Hercules begs forgiveness to gods but the gods say he has to do 12 tasks to be forgiven. I think 12 tasks will very hard to suceed. ======> I think 12 tasks are very hard to fulfill. Hi Daniel! Thank you for sharing about Hercules. The arrangement of sentences was good. However, there were still few slips with verb tenses and nouns. Hope to hear the next chapter. Yours Truly, Teacher Bella