1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2014-08-21 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Robot Suit Fight 8 내 용 Stat versus Malina. Fight! Stat run to Malina and hit! As you know, Malina has rubber joint so, Malina go staright to Stat. Stat throw marble about 12345! It is all robot. It goes to malina and cut malina's rubber joint! Malina ride something called Raptor(it is real robot). Raptor crash marble robot! Then, Raptor throw a books. It is monster book(it is in Harry potter). It eat Stat's leg! Then, arm, hand, body and only head left! Malina win! Malina is bronze medal! next and last game the FINAL! STARK VERSUS KEMULA=KOREA VERSUS JAPAN! 답변자 ts0096 답변일 2014-08-23 답변내용 Stat versus Malina. Fight! -correct Stat run to Malina and hit! -Stat ran to Malina and hit! As you know, Malina has rubber joint so, Malina go staright to Stat. -As you know, Malina has a rubber joint, so she went straight to Stat. Stat throw marble about 12345! -Stat threw marbles about 12,345! It is all robot. -They were all robots. It goes to malina and cut malina's rubber joint! -They went to Malina and cut Malina's rubber joint! Malina ride something called Raptor(it is real robot). -Malina rode on something called Raptor (it is a real robot). Raptor crash marble robot! -Raptor crashed the marble robot! Then, Raptor throw a books. -Then, Raptor threw a book. It is monster book(it is in Harry potter). -It was a monster book (it is in Harry Potter). It eat Stat's leg! -It ate Stat's leg. Then, arm, hand, body and only head left! -Then its arm, hand, and body, but only the head was left. Malina win! -Malina won! Malina is bronze medal! -Malina got a bronze medal! next and last game the FINAL! STARK VERSUS KEMULA=KOREA VERSUS JAPAN! -And the final game, Stark versus Kemula - Korea versus Japan! Comments 1. Use past tenses. 2. Clarify some of your thoughts. I got confused for some plural or singular objects. Mason, this was really great! I love the story! I'm so excited for the ending! :D