1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2014-07-30 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Robot suit fight 6 내 용 Stark versus stat. Stark made new weapon. Goldiraks. It is very shine thing that can't open eye. Fight! Stat got very fast speed. Stat ran to stark and hit. Stark fell down and top of the stark, there is stat. Then, stark throw goldiraks. That time, stark pointed gun at stat arms and shot! Goldiraks got off. And of course, stat got no one arm. Stat run to stark again and stark throw goldiraks again. Stat run into stat's coach because stat cannot see anything. Stat's coach and stat go to hosptill. Stark win! Next game is malina versus kemula. 답변자 ts0096 답변일 2014-07-30 답변내용 Stark versus stat. -Stat Stark made new weapon. Goldiraks. -Stark made a new weapon - Goldiraks. It is very shine thing that can't open eye. -It was a very shiny weapon that can make your eyes not open. Fight! -correct Stat got very fast speed. -a very Stat ran to stark and hit. -Stark Stark fell down and top of the stark, there is stat. -on top of Stark was Stat. Then, stark throw goldiraks. -Stark threw the Goldiraks. That time, stark pointed gun at stat arms and shot! -Stark pointed a gun at Stat's arms Goldiraks got off. -correct And of course, stat got no one arm. -Stat Stat run to stark again and stark throw goldiraks again. -ran; threw; Goldiraks Stat run into stat's coach because stat cannot see anything. -ran; Stat's; Stat could not Stat's coach and stat go to hosptill. -Stat and his coach went to the hospital Stark win! -won Next game is malina versus kemula. -Malina; Kemula Comments 1. Capitalize names. 2. Use correct tenses. 3. Be careful with the spelling. Mason, this one is really exciting, but follow my corrections above. Keep on writing! :)