1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2014-07-14 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 robot suit 4 내 용 This game is kemula versus gaul. First, kemula grab two hand of gaul but, that same time, gaul also grab kemula’s two hands. Kemula got three hand so, kemula hit gal with one powerful hand. Then, a sword got out of gaul’s body and cut kemula’s thrid hand! Kemula let gaul go. Then, there is a sound of machine then, whiring sound. Then, boom! Gaul got only one hand! It was bomb! Gaul got white flag on his one hand. It means reuunciation. Kemula win! Next is swedon versus stat, game a(stark versus swedon or stat), game b(malina versus kemula), final (game a winner versus game b winner) then, thrid and fourth game(game a loser versus game b loser). 답변자 ts0096 답변일 2014-07-15 답변내용 This game is kemula versus gaul. -was Kemula versus Gaul. First, kemula grab two hand of gaul but, that same time, gaul also grab kemula’s two hands. -Kemula grabbed; hands of Gaul, but at the same time, Gaul also grabbed Kemula's two hands. Kemula got three hand so, kemula hit gal with one powerful hand. -hands; Kemula hit Gaul Then, a sword got out of gaul’s body and cut kemula’s thrid hand! -Gaul's; Kemula's third Kemula let gaul go. -Gaul Then, there is a sound of machine then, whiring sound. -was a sound of a machine followed by a whirring sound. Then, boom! -correct Gaul got only one hand! -correct It was bomb! -a bomb Gaul got white flag on his one hand. -the white flag It means reuunciation. -renunciation Kemula win! -won/wins Next is swedon versus stat, game a(stark versus swedon or stat), game b(malina versus kemula), final (game a winner versus game b winner) then, thrid and fourth game(game a loser versus game b loser). -was Swedon versus Stat; in Game A was Stark versus Swedon or Stat; in Game B was Malina versus Kemula; and in finals would be the Game A winner versus the Game B winner; then the third and fourth games would be the loser of Game A versus the loser of Game B. Comments 1. Capitalize the title. 2. Capitalize proper names. 3. Use past tenses. Mason, thank you for your story. It gets really exciting. However, just follow my corrections in your next story. I'm looking forward to the finale of the story. :)