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If I write all group fight, it will so long so, I will only say tournament fight. Stark won by length control gun. Group A¡¯s winner is stark(korea), B is meji(china), C is swedon(swedan) D is stat(england) E is bothon(usa), F is malina.[mason+lilly+nash{they are my austrailan friend.(austraila)}] G is gaul{france (haha!)} H is kemula(japan). First fight is bothon versus malina! When the start bell ring, bothon kick malina, but, malina is too fast for him. But, unfortanely but fortanely, after every kick and run they all got low battery. But, bothon keep kicking. But, it is low battery, so, it is too slow. Malina just walk. Then, bothon can¡¯t move! He got NO battery. So, malina just one tiny punch, bothon fell to the ground. Malina win! Next fight is stark versus meji!
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If I write all group fight, it will so long so, I will only say tournament fight. -all the group's fight, it will take too long, so I will only tell about the tournament. Stark won by length control gun. -won with a length control gun Group A¡¯s winner is stark(korea), B is meji(china), C is swedon(swedan) D is stat(england) E is bothon(usa), F is malina.[mason+lilly+nash{they are my austrailan friend.(austraila)}] G is gaul{france (haha!)} H is kemula(japan). -Group A's winner is Stark (Korea), B's winner is Meji (China), C's winner is Swedon (Sweden), D's winner is Stat (England), E's winner is Bothon (USA), F's winner is Malina (Mason + Lilly + Nash - they are my Austrailan friends) (Austraila), G's winner is Gaul (France (haha!)), and H's winner is Kemula (Japan). First fight is bothon versus malina! -The first; Bothon versus Malina When the start bell ring, bothon kick malina, but, malina is too fast for him. -bell starts to rang; Bothon kicked Malina; Malina But, unfortanely but fortanely, after every kick and run they all got low battery. -unfortunately but fortunately; after every kick and run, they both got a low battery. But, bothon keep kicking. -Bothon kept kicking But, it is low battery, so, it is too slow. -the battery is low, so it is too slow Malina just walk. -Malina just walked. Then, bothon can¡¯t move! -Bothon can't He got NO battery. -correct So, malina just one tiny punch, bothon fell to the ground. -Malina just gave one weak punch and Bothon fell on the ground. Malina win! -won! Next fight is stark versus meji! -Stark; Meji Comments: 1. I love your imagination and creativity. 2. The story is very interesting. 3. Capitalize plural nouns like Stark, Bothon, Malina, etc. 4. Capitalize the letters in the title. 5. Use past tenses when telling a story. Hi Mason, thank you for this! I'm looking forward to the continuation of the story! Great job! :)