1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2014-06-09 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Robot suit fight 내 용 There is a man named stark. Made the robot suit. Then, some day, he found that there is a robot suit fight in USA! So, he got the ticket go to that USA boston and get the robot and ride a ship(it is not airplane because in plane, the suit can’t get in.). His robot suit has very special thing. In the ticket, it can use gun, but, no the robot suit can’t hurt people. It got group. Stark is group A. And, stark’s suit has very many joint. The last year winner is in group H. That last winner is from japan. His name is kemula. Keamula has three hand. So, when some robot will hit them, kemula will grab both arm with two hand and other one hand is by hitting........... 답변자 ts0096 답변일 2014-06-09 답변내용 There is a man named stark. Made the robot suit. -There is a man named Stark who made a robot suit. Then, some day, he found that there is a robot suit fight in USA! -Then, one day, he found that there was a robot suit fight in the USA! So, he got the ticket go to that USA boston and get the robot and ride a ship(it is not airplane because in plane, the suit can’t get in.). -So, he got the ticket to go to Boston, USA and got the robot and ride a ship. He couldn't get into an airplane because the suit couldn’t get in. His robot suit has very special thing. -His robot suit has a very special thing. In the ticket, it can use gun, but, no the robot suit can’t hurt people. -In the ticket, it can use gun, but the robot suit can't hurt people. It got group. -It got a group. Stark is group A. -correct And, stark’s suit has very many joint. -And, Starks suit has a lot of joints. The last year winner is in group H. -The last year's winner was in group H. That last winner is from japan. -That last winner was from japan. His name is kemula. -His name is Kemula. Keamula has three hand. -Kemula has three hands. So, when some robot will hit them, kemula will grab both arm with two hand and other one hand is by hitting........... -So, if some robots hit them, kemula will grab both arm with two hands and the other hand is for hitting. Comments: 1. It was creatively and imaginatively written. 2. Capitalize your title and proper names. 3. Use "the" for the USA. Olaf, thank you for writing this diary. I appreciate your effort. Keep on writing to improve your grammar and writing skills. :)