1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-12-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No.19-Hacking case 내 용 I have big news to tell you. It is because that my naver ID and Password was hacked by some crazy old piece of junk. I think he or she is very crazy. He is dork, just a piece of plastic. He hacked my ID and Password and... Do you want to hear what he did? Well he actually writes about casinos, poker, online game and lots of other bad stuffs in my own blog. Can you believe that? That blog is kind of my privacy. I wrote English diary in there, and lots and lots of other stuff like camping and that stuff. But I can delete it. It is because that crazy man or woman put on this garbage in the empty category. So if I delete that category, I can delete all stuff like casinos and like that. I think he or she is the craziest man of woman in the world. It is because I wrote in my letter of self-introduction in my blog, and I said “I’m fourth-grade”. People or bloggers will know that I’m kid. But this guy has no eyes I think. Now let’s talk about the suspects. I think it is not mom or dad, because dad knows my Password and how to hack, but, I think he will not going to writes about casinos and poker. Oh, he knows my Password because he made for me. My mom doesn’t know about my password and casinos. So I think she is not. I think it is Black Hacker’s job. It is because Gray Hackers and White Hackers don’t do this, because they sometimes do lots of good things. Anyway, I think I have to tell my dad. It is because he is information security professional and both banker. He will handle this case easily. Because that I know IP of that computer. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-12-24 답변내용 I have big news to tell you. >>I have a big news to tell you. (lack of article) It is because that my naver ID and Password was hacked by some crazy old piece of junk. >>My naver account was hacked by someone crazy. (intended message / unnecessary words) I think he or she is very crazy. >>Good sentence! He is dork, just a piece of plastic. >>He is a dork, just a piece of plastic. (lack of article) He hacked my ID and Password and... >>He knew my ID and Password so he hacked my naver account. (intended message) Do you want to hear what he did? >>Good sentence! Well he actually writes about casinos, poker, online games and lots of other bad stuffs in my own blog. >>Well he actually writes about casinos, poker, online games and lots of other bad stuff in my own blog. (pluralization) Can you believe that? >>Good sentence! That blog is kind of my privacy. >>That blog is private. (intended message) I wrote English diary in there, and lots and lots of other stuff like camping and that stuff. But I can delete it. >>I wrote English diary in there and lots of other stuff like camping, but I can delete it. (unnecessary words) It is because that crazy man or woman put on this garbage in the empty category. So if I delete that category, I can delete all stuff like casinos and like that. >>What do you mean? I think he or she is the craziest man of woman in the world. >>I think he or she is the craziest man/woman in the world. (unnecessary preposition) It is because I wrote in my letter of self-introduction in my blog, and I said “I’m fourth-grade”. >>It is because I wrote in my letter of self-introduction in my blog that “I’m a fourth-grade student. (choice of word) People or bloggers will know that I’m kid. But this guy has no eyes I think. >>People or bloggers will know that I’m a kid, but this guy has no eyes I think. (lack of article) Now let’s talk about the suspects. >>Good sentence! I think it is not mom or dad, because dad knows my Password and how to hack, but, I think he will not going to writes about casinos and poker. >>I think it is not mom or dad, because dad knows my password and how to hack, but I think he will not write about casinos and poker. (verb tense / improper capitalization) Oh, he knows my Password because he made for me. >>Oh, he knows my password because he made it for me. (lack of pronoun / improper capitalization) My mom doesn’t know about my password and casinos. So I think she is not. >>My mom doesn’t know my password and casinos, so I think she didn' t do it. (intended message) I think it is Black Hacker’s job. >>I think it is the Black Hacker’s job. (lack of article) It is because Gray Hackers and White Hackers don’t do this, because they sometimes do lots of good things. >>Good sentence! Anyway, I think I have to tell my dad. >>Good sentence! It is because he is information security professional and both banker. >>It is because he is an information security professional and also a banker. (lack of article / choice of word) He will handle this case easily. Because that I know IP of that computer. >>He will handle this case easily because I know the IP of that computer. (sentence construction / unnecessary word) Thanks for writing! I hope your father can solve this problem. Have a Merry Christmas!