1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-12-20 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No.18-Good & Bad news 내 용 Oh no... There are good news and bad news. What do you want to read first? I think we have to talk about good news. Now good news is that President Election is end. So I don’t have to talk about Election or Candidates or something like that. Anyway bad news is that yesterday was over. You think it is good news? Well not. Because yesterday was Election Day and we can stay home with my mom and dad. But most bad news is this. Park Geun-hye had become South Korea’s 18th president. So I think the South Korea will be destroyed. She is first woman president in South or maybe both Korea’s history. It is because except for about 1000 years ago, Sin-la’s queens (Sun-duck, Jin-duck, and Jin-sung). I ‘m very furious because of this Park Geun-hye becomes South Korea’s 18th president. I supported Moon Jae-in. When I was riding a car, I always shouted “Let’s vote Moon Jae-in!!” I thought that it will work. But I think it doesn’t. Anyway let’s talk about superintendent of education. I was very upset that superintendent become Moon Yong-lin. me and my family supported Lee Soo-ho. Yesterday night, my dad was very upset that President become Park Geun-hye. And I’m very furious. But I think it is just spill water. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-12-21 답변내용 Oh no... There are good news and bad news. >>Good sentence! What do you want to read first? >>Good sentence! I think we have to talk about good news. >>Good sentence! Now good news is that President Election is end. So I don’t have to talk about Election or Candidates or something like that. >>The good news is that the presidential election is over so I don’t have to talk about election or candidates or something like that. (sentence construction / improper capitalization) Anyway bad news is that yesterday was over. >>Anyway the bad news is that yesterday was over. (lack of article) You think it is good news? Well not. Because yesterday was Election Day and we can stay home with my mom and dad. But most bad news is this. >>Do you think it is a good news, well it is not , because yesterday was the election day and we could stay home with my mom and dad. (sentence construction) But most bad news is this. Park Geun-hye had become South Korea’s 18th president. So I think the South Korea will be destroyed. >>The bad news is that Park Geun-hye became South Korea’s 18th president so I think the South Korea will be destroyed. (sentence construction) She is first woman president in South or maybe both Korea’s history. >>She is the first female president in the history of Korea. (intended message) It is because except for about 1000 years ago, Sin-la’s queens (Sun-duck, Jin-duck, and Jin-sung). >>What do you mean? I ‘m very furious because of this Park Geun-hye becomes South Korea’s 18th president. >>I ‘m very furious because Park Geun-hye became South Korea’s 18th president. (unnecessary word) I supported Moon Jae-in. >>Good sentence! When I was riding a car, I always shouted “Let’s vote Moon Jae-in!!” >>Good sentence! I thought that it will work. But I think it doesn’t. >> I thought that it will work but I think it didn't. (verb tense) Anyway let’s talk about superintendent of education. >>Anyway let’s talk about the superintendent of education. (lack of article0 I was very upset that superintendent become Moon Yong-lin. >>I was very upset that Moon Yong-lin became the superintendent. (word order) me and my family supported Lee Soo-ho. >>My family and I supported Lee Soo-ho. (word order) Yesterday night, my dad was very upset that President become Park Geun-hye. And I’m very furious. But I think it is just spill water. >>Last night, my dad was very upset that Park Geun-hye became the president and I’m very furious. (choice of word / word order) Thanks for the effort! Keep writing!