1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-12-19 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No. 17-Election day 내 용 Korea’s Election Day has come. So I will write about this Election Day. So today was big day. It is because my parents vote 2 times. Like superintendent and 19th new president. The candidates were President candidates: Park Geon-hye, Moon Jae-in, Lee Jung-hee (resigned) Park Jong-sun, Kim So-yeon, Kang Ji-won, and lastly Kim Soon-ja. I hoped Moon Jae-in will be the president of South Korea. I hate Park Geon-hye. Because I think she is lying. She said “Moon Jae-in was No Moo-hyun former president’s secretary. No moo-hyun was any good at politics. That was bad time.” But if we go that way, Park Geon-hye is bad too. It is because; her ruling party’s president Lee Myung-bak was bad president too. Pour the national power at the four-river project. These four rivers are Han River, Geum River, Nakdong River and lastly Yeongsan River. I think this was the dumbest idea ever think. Anyway, I hope Moon Jae-in will be the president. He is best candidates ever I think. So now let’s talk about superintendent candidates. There were Lee Sang-myun (resigned) Moon Yong-lin, Choi Myung-bok, Lee Soo-ho and lastly Nam Sung-hee. Nam Sung-hee is female. My mom and dad vote Lee Soo-ho but Moon Yong-lin is now best I think. I hope Moon Jae-in will win. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-12-20 답변내용 Korea’s Election Day has come. So I will write about this Election Day. >>Korea’s election day has come so I will write about it. (redundancy) So today was big day. >>Today was a big day. (unnecessary word / lack of article) It is because my parents vote 2 times. Like superintendent and 19th new president. >>What do you mean? The candidates were President candidates: Park Geon-hye, Moon Jae-in, Lee Jung-hee (resigned) Park Jong-sun, Kim So-yeon, Kang Ji-won, and lastly Kim Soon-ja. >> The candidates were Park Geon-hye, Moon Jae-in, Lee Jung-hee (resigned) Park Jong-sun, Kim So-yeon, Kang Ji-won and lastly Kim Soon-ja. (unnecessary words) I hoped Moon Jae-in will be the president of South Korea. >>Good sentence! I hate Park Geon-hye. Because I think she is lying. >>I hate Park Geon-hye because I think she is lying. ( She said “Moon Jae-in was No Moo-hyun former president’s secretary. >>She said “Moon Jae-in was the secretary of former president No Moo-hyun. (word order) No moo-hyun was any good at politics. >>What do you mean? That was bad time.” But if we go that way, Park Geon-hye is bad too. >> That was a bad time , but if we go that way, Park Geon-hye is bad too. (lack of article) It is because; her ruling party’s president Lee Myung-bak was bad president too. >>It is because her ruling party’s president, Lee Myung-bak, was a bad president too. (lack of article) Pour the national power at the four-river project. >>He poured the national power at the four-river project. (sentence construction) These four rivers are Han River, Geum River, Nakdong River and lastly Yeongsan River. >>Those four rivers are Han River, Geum River, Nakdong River and lastly Yeongsan River. (choice of word) I think this was the dumbest idea ever think. >>I think this was the dumbest idea they ever thought. (intended message) Anyway, I hope Moon Jae-in will be the president. >>Good sentence! He is best candidates ever I think. >>He is the best candidate I think. (lack of article / singular form) So now let’s talk about superintendent candidates. >>Now let’s talk about the superintendent candidates. (unnecessary word / lack of article) There were Lee Sang-myun (resigned) Moon Yong-lin, Choi Myung-bok, Lee Soo-ho and lastly Nam Sung-hee. >>Good sentence! Nam Sung-hee is female. >>Good sentence! My mom and dad vote Lee Soo-ho but Moon Yong-lin is now best I think. >>My mom and dad voted Lee Soo-ho but I think Moon Yong-lin is the best. (verb tense /word order) I hope Moon Jae-in will win. >>Good sentence! Thanks for writing! Let's wait for the results.