1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-12-18 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No.17-Apple VS. Samsung 내 용 Today I think I will talk about Samsung and Apples. I hate both companies. Mostly Apple. That company is not workin at all. They are just readying for win in the court. I hate Samsung too. So that's why I want to buy SKY's Vega Racer 2. Like I wrote at Dc diary No. 14, my friend have that phone, and it look very cool. So let's talk about Samsung and Apple. Samsun was created by Lee Byung-chul. And Apple was created by Steve Jobs and Steve W. I think it was good company when it was lead by two steve. Oh, and this Steve W. is Steve Wozniak. It is also creater of Apple. Steve Jobs loved apple. Not company, the fruit apple. So the company name become apple. Good story isn't it? Samsung is good too. Because, Samsung is one of the star in the world. No, mabe Three Star. Because Sam mean three and sung mean star. Samsung and Apple met at court many times. I hope Lucy Koh made the right decisions. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-12-19 답변내용 Today I think I will talk about Samsung and Apples. >>Today I think I will talk about Samsung and Apple. (singular form) I hate both companies. Mostly Apple. >>I hate both companies, most especially Apple. (intended message) That company is not workin at all. >>That company is not working at all. (spelling) They are just readying for win in the court. >>They are just preparing to win in the court. (choice of words) I hate Samsung too. So that's why I want to buy SKY's Vega Racer 2. Like I wrote at Dc diary No. 14, >>I hate Samsung too, that's why I want to buy SKY's Vega Racer 2, the one that I wrote at Dc diary No. 14. (sentence construction) my friend have that phone, and it look very cool. >>My friend has that phone and it looks very cool. (capitalization / subject-verb agreement) So let's talk about Samsung and Apple. >>Now let's talk about Samsung and Apple. (choice of word) Samsun was created by Lee Byung-chul. And Apple was created by Steve Jobs and Steve W. >>Samsung was created by Lee Byung-chul and Apple was created by Steve Jobs and Steve W. (sentence construction) I think it was good company when it was lead by two steve. >>I think it was a good company when it was lead by the two Steves. (lack of article / capitalization) Oh, and this Steve W. is Steve Wozniak. >>Steve W. is Steve Wozniak. (sentence construction) It is also creater of Apple. >>He is also the creator of Apple. (choice of pronoun / spelling) Steve Jobs loved apple. Not company, the fruit apple. So the company name become apple. >>Steve Jobs loved apple, not the company, the fruit apple, so the company's name became apple. (sentence construction) Good story isn't it? >>Good sentence! Samsung is good too. Because, Samsung is one of the star in the world. No, mabe Three Star. Because Sam mean three and sung mean star. >>What do you mean? Samsung and Apple met at court many times. >>Samsung and Apple met at a court many times. (lack of article) I hope Lucy Koh made the right decisions. >>Good sentence!