1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-12-12 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No.14-Phone that I want to buy 내 용 I'm sorry that I can't write about Millitary special:Su-25. It was Russia's and now it is in North Korea. Migg-25 is one of the Russia's too. It is also in North Korea. I promise that I will write about Su-25 or Migg-25. Any way, I want a phone. My dad's phone is iphone 5. But Internet and Social Network Services(Twitter and me2day) are saying that iphone 5 has lots of bad things, good thing is that my dad changed phone at Monday. So I don't think his phone is uncomtable. My mom's phone is Galaxy S2. I hate that phone. Because once by mistake, she drop her phone in to water, so It's battery ran out quickly and it's services are bad. I want that she change her phone in to Galaxy S3. In newspaper, magazine, internet, all they are saying is about this Galaxy S3. Or I want she change her phone in to Galaxy Note 2. With S-pen, it is good enough for me. Okay anyway let's talk about phone that I want. Not my mom's or my dad's. I want Vega Racer 2. Because it looks cool. And I don't want any other Samsung or Apple's phone. Because I like fighting in the court but Samsung's phone has lots of virus and Apple's iphone is to limited. So I want SKY's Vega Racer 2. My friend Alvin have this phone and it looks great. If I get a phone, I can call, chat in Kakao Talk, search somethings and many other things. I want Vega Racer 2. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-12-13 답변내용 I'm sorry that I can't write about Millitary special:Su-25. >>I'm sorry that I can't write about the Millitary special:Su-25. (lack of article) It was Russia's and now it is in North Korea. >>Good sentence! Migg-25 is one of the Russia's too. >>Migg-25 is one of Russia's combat plane ,too. (unnecessary article) It is also in North Korea. >>Good sentence! I promise that I will write about Su-25 or Migg-25. >>Good sentence! Any way, I want a phone. >>Good sentence! My dad's phone is iphone 5. But Internet and Social Network Services(Twitter and me2day) are saying that iphone 5 has lots of bad things, good thing is that my dad changed phone at Monday. So I don't think his phone is uncomtable. >>My dad's phone is iphone 5,but Internet and Social Network Services(Twitter and me2day) are saying that iphone 5 has lots of bad things, the good thing is that my dad changed his phone on Monday, so I don't think his phone is uncomtable. (sentence construction / choice of preposition) My mom's phone is Galaxy S2. >>Good sentence! I hate that phone. Because once by mistake, she drop her phone in to water, so It's battery ran out quickly and it's services are bad. >>I hate that phone because once by mistake, she dropped her phone into the water, so its battery ran out quickly and its services are bad. (choice of word its instead of it's) I want that she change her phone in to Galaxy S3. >>I want her to change her phone into Galaxy S3. (intended message) In newspapers, magazines, internet, all they are saying is about this Galaxy S3. >>In newspapers, magazines and internet, all they are saying is about this Galaxy S3. (lack of conjunction) Or I want she change her phone in to Galaxy Note 2. With S-pen, it is good enough for me. >>She can also change her phone into Galaxy Note 2 with S-pen, it is good enough for me. (intended message) Okay anyway let's talk about phone that I want. Not my mom's or my dad's. >>Okay anyway let's talk about the phone that I want,not my mom's or my dad's. (lack of conjunction / sentence construction) I want Vega Racer 2. Because it looks cool. >>I want Vega Racer 2 because it looks cool. (sentence construction) And I don't want any other Samsung or Apple's phone. Because I like fighting in the court but Samsung's phone has lots of virus and Apple's iphone is to limited. So I want SKY's Vega Racer 2. >> I don't want any other Samsung or Apple's phone because I like fighting in the court but Samsung's phone has lots of viruses and Apple's iphone is too limited,so I want SKY's Vega Racer 2. (sentence construction / make sure the ideas in the sentences are connected to one another) My friend Alvin have this phone and it looks great. >>My friend Alvin has this phone and it looks great. (subject-verb agreement) If I get a phone, I can call, chat in Kakao Talk, search somethings and many other things. >>If I get a phone, I can call, chat in Kakao Talk, search some things and many other things. (spacing) I want Vega Racer 2. >>Good sentence!