1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-12-11 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Dc diary No.13-Millitary special:A-10 Thunderbolt II 내 용 Today's Millitary special A-10 Thunderbolt II. It's official name is Thunderbolt II, but pilot call them Warthog. Because it looks like Warthog. Warthog is African black boar.It is only for CAS(Close Air Support). The only combat plane that for this CAS was Su-25. It was former Soviet Union's. Former Soviet Union was had very powerful millitary power with United States of America. It is difficult that having a combat planes with only for one purpose. Ju-87, II-2, P-47 were one of combat planes that used dby CAS. After A-10, other CAS combat planes were used at Vietnam War. They are F-4 Phantom,A-7 (Corsair II), F-105 Thunderchief, and lastly A-37. Actually it is not for CAS. They are all Fighters, Bombers, Attckers, but they have to use for CAS, so they can't bring satisfaction result. United States of America thought they need another CAS combat planes, so they started AX business at 1966. The meaning of A-10 is 30mm GAU-8 Avenger Gatling gun. This 30mm GAU-8 Avenger Gatling gun is very powerful. And defensive power of A-10 is very powerful too. So I think it is good for A-10 and United States of America. It can fly 706 killometer per hour. Tomorrow I'm going to talk about enemy of this A-10 Thunderbolt II, Su-25. Like I said before, it is Russia's. So remember that. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-12-12 답변내용 Today's Millitary special A-10 Thunderbolt II. >>Today I will talk about the Military special A-10 Thunderbolt II. (incomplete thought) It's official name is Thunderbolt II, but pilot call them Warthog. Because it looks like Warthog. >>It's official name is Thunderbolt II, but pilots call them Warthog because it looks like a Warthog. (sentence construction / pluralization / lack of article) Warthog is African black boar. >>A Warthog is an African black boar. (lack of article) It is only for CAS(Close Air Support). >>Good sentence! The only combat plane that for this CAS was Su-25. >>The only combat plane for this CAS was Su-25. (unnecessary word) It was former Soviet Union's. >>It was owned the former Soviet Union. (intended message) Former Soviet Union was had very powerful millitary power with United States of America. >>What do you mean? It is difficult that having a combat planes with only for one purpose. >>It is difficult to have combat planes with only one purpose. (unnecessary words) Ju-87, II-2, P-47 were one of combat planes that used dby CAS. >>Ju-87, II-2, P-47 were some of the combat planes used by CAS. (choice of word / lack of article) After A-10, other CAS combat planes were used at Vietnam War. >>After A-10, other CAS combat planes were used during the Vietnam War. (choice of word) They are F-4 Phantom,A-7 (Corsair II), F-105 Thunderchief, and lastly A-37. >>They were F-4 Phantom,A-7 (Corsair II), F-105 Thunderchief and lastly A-37. (verb tense) Actually it is not for CAS. >>Actually those are not for CAS. (choice of words) They are all Fighters, Bombers, Attckers, but they have to use for CAS, so they can't bring satisfaction result. >>They are all Fighters, Bombers, Attackers, but they have to be used for CAS, so they can't bring satisfactory results. (spelling / choice of word) United States of America thought they need another CAS combat planes, so they started AX business at 1966. >>The United States of America thought they need another CAS combat plane, so they started the AX business at 1966. (singular form / lack of article) The meaning of A-10 is 30mm GAU-8 Avenger Gatling gun. >>Good sentence! This 30mm GAU-8 Avenger Gatling gun is very powerful. >>Good sentence! And defensive power of A-10 is very powerful too. So I think it is good for A-10 and United States of America. >>The defensive power of A-10 is very powerful too, so I think it is good for the United States of America. (sentence construction / intended message) It can fly 706 killometer per hour. >>It can fly 706 killometers per hour. (pluralization) Tomorrow I'm going to talk about enemy of this A-10 Thunderbolt II, Su-25. >>Tomorrow I'm going to talk about the enemy of this A-10 Thunderbolt II, Su-25. (lack of article) Like I said before, it is Russia's. So remember that. >>Like I said before, it is Russia's, so remember that. (sentence construction) Thanks for the effort! Keep writing!