1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-12-10 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No.12-President candidates 내 용 There are President election in December 19th. There are seven candidates in President election. They are Park Geun-hye, Moon Jae-in, Lee Jung-hee, Park Jong-sun, Kim So-youn, Kang Ji-won, and lastly Kim Soon-ja. Park Geun-hye is from Saenuri Party. Moon Jae-in is from Min-joo party. Lee Jung-hee is from goupp party. Park Jong-sun, Kim So-youn, Kang Ji-won, Kim Soon-ja are have no party. Park Jong-sun is crazy. Because one of his promise is "Using Han-ja." It is not Korean. It is Chineese. He is very old. He is 84-years-old. I think he is very old. And Kim Soon-ja was cleaning worker. I think they are very brave. They will just experiencing for candidates. I think it cost lots of money. It is just wasting money for other candidates who have not party. I'm now watching television debate. It is very interesting. Lee Jung-hee is very attacktive. And Moon Jae-in is very good at talking. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-12-11 답변내용 There are President election in December 19th. >>The presidential election is on December 19. (intended message) There are seven candidates in President election. >>There are seven candidates in the presidential election. (choice of word) They are Park Geun-hye, Moon Jae-in, Lee Jung-hee, Park Jong-sun, Kim So-youn, Kang Ji-won, and lastly Kim Soon-ja. >>Good sentence! Park Geun-hye is from Saenuri Party. >>Park Geun-hye is from the Saenuri Party. (lack of article) Moon Jae-in is from Min-joo party. >>Moon Jae-in is from the Min-joo party. (lack of article) Lee Jung-hee is from goupp party. >>Lee Jung-hee is from the goupp party. (lack of article) Park Jong-sun, Kim So-youn, Kang Ji-won, Kim Soon-ja are have no party. >>Park Jong-sun, Kim So-youn, Kang Ji-won, Kim Soon-ja don't belong to any political party. (intended message) Park Jong-sun is crazy. Because one of his promise is "Using Han-ja." >>Park Jong-sun is crazy because one of his promise is "Using Han-ja." (sentence construction) It is not Korean. >>Good sentence! It is Chineese. >>Good sentence! He is very old. >>Good sentence! He is 84-years-old. >>Good sentence! I think he is very old. >>Good sentence! And Kim Soon-ja was cleaning worker. >>Kim Soon-ja was a janitor. (choice of word) I think they are very brave. >>Good sentence! They will just experiencing for candidates. >>They just want to experience being candidates. (intended message) I think it cost lots of money. >>I think it costs lots of money. (subject-verb agreement) It is just wasting money for other candidates who have not party. >>It is just a waste of money for the other candidates who don't belong to any political party. (intended message) I'm now watching television debate. >> I'm now watching a debate on tv. (intended message) It is very interesting. >>Good sentence! Lee Jung-hee is very attacktive. And Moon Jae-in is very good at talking. >>Lee Jung-hee is very aggressive and Moon Jae-in is very good at talking. (choice of word / sentence construction) Thanls for writing! Your diary is very informative! Keep writing!