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Dc diary No.9-Millitary special:M1911 Pistol
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Do you know kind of Pistol, I'm writing about Millitary special. And first is pistol. Because, I wrote about New combat planes. F-22 Raptor, F-15SE silence eagle, F-35 Lightning II, and lastly Euro FIghter Typhoon(EFT). Read carefully. It is very similar inside. I saw the picture of M1911 pistol's inside. It was very simple. Spring, cover, handle grip, and metals. You think it is not simple? Well, it is very simple. It is also very powerful. You see, There are many other pistol, like K5 pistol, M9 piostol, 44 Magnum(very powerful), 38 Revolver. But they can use other, but they use M1911 till now. It means very powerful. Who want to use not powerful pistol? huh? 44 Magnum is also known as monster pistol. If you shoot correctly, you can catch bear with this 44 Magnum. But it is very long so it is difficult to carry. But M1911 is short and powerful, so it is easy to carry too. It want this M1911 with toy gun. Not model, BB gun. I think it will be look good. Tomorrow, I'm going to tell you about AK-47. It is gun of change. It is also enemy of M-16 rifle.
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Do you know kind of Pistol >>Do you know any kind of pistol? (lack of question mark) I'm writing about Millitary special. >> I'm writing about a military special. (spelling / lack of article) And first is pistol. Because, I wrote about New combat planes. F-22 Raptor, F-15SE silence eagle, F-35 Lightning II, and lastly Euro FIghter Typhoon(EFT). >>What do you mean? try to reconstruct the sentence. Read carefully. >>Good sentence! It is very similar inside. >>Good sentence! I saw the picture of M1911 pistol's inside. >>I saw the picture of the inside of M1911 pistol. (word order) It was very simple. >>Good sentence! Spring, cover, handle grip, and metals. >>It has a spring, cover, handle grip and metals. (incomplete sentence) You think it is not simple? >>Good sentence! Well, it is very simple. >>Good sentence! It is also very powerful. >>Good sentence! You see, There are many other pistol, like K5 pistol, M9 piostol, 44 Magnum(very powerful), 38 Revolver. But they can use other, but they use M1911 till now. >>Please reconstruct the sentence to make it easier to understand. It means very powerful. >>It means it is very powerful. (lack of verb) Who want to use not powerful pistol? >>Who doesn't want to use a powerful pistol? (intended message) 44 Magnum is also known as monster pistol. >>Good sentence! If you shoot correctly, you can catch bear with this 44 Magnum. But it is very long so it is difficult to carry. >>If you shoot correctly, you can catch a bear with this 44 Magnum, but it is very long so it is difficult to carry. (sentence construction) But M1911 is short and powerful, so it is easy to carry too. >>M1911 is short and powerful, so it is easy to carry too. (unnecessary word) It want this M1911 with toy gun. Not model, BB gun. >>I want an M1911 toy gun, not the real one. (intended message) I think it will be look good. >>I think it will look good. (unnecessary word) Tomorrow, I'm going to tell you about AK-47. >>Good sentence! It is gun of change. >>What do you mean? It is also enemy of M-16 rifle. >> It is also the enemy of M-16 rifle. (lack of article) Thanks for the effort! Keep writing!