1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-12-04 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No.8-only one exam to go! 내 용 I had four exams this week. Some was little easy, some was hard. Some gets good grades, some gets little bad. But one thing to remember is that I did not get grade under 95. Now I'm going to tell you about four exam, so read carefully. If you have opportunity, visit our school. It is in Seoul, Korea. Guro, Sindorim. I'm in Sindorim Elementry school. There are two more other elementry schools in Sindorim. One is Mi-rae Elementry school, and other is Sinmirim Elementry school. Okay, now I'm really going to tell you about the exams. First exam is Science exam. It was not hard. It was easy. Not just easy. Very easy. I get 20 grade. It mean 100 grade. In my class, they use to call 100 grade in to 20 grade. Because exam have 20 problems. It make my privilege to other class's friend. Because if I said "I get 20 grade," they gasp. Then I said "It is 100 grade," they become angry because I fool them. I did it one time and it was fun. Second and third exams are finals. They are hardship for many kids. But I overcame it. Second one is Korean, third one is math. I get -4 in math. It mean I get 96. In Korean? I get 100. Ji-woo and So-yean get 100 in math. Me, Sin-yang, and Hyo-ju(She just transformed form other school last week. Because she moved in to Don-a Apartment number one. My average is 98. Ji-woo's averige is 97. Because, he gets 94 in Korean. I win him. In first semester's finals, I loosed. Because in first semester, my average was 97 and Ji-woo got 97.5. It is just 0.5 grade difference. But today, I win by 1 grade. Next is math competition. I did this exam today. It will be on tomorrow. I want to get 100. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-12-06 답변내용 I had four exams this week. >>Good sentence! Some was little easy, some was hard. >>Some were a little easy and some were hard. (verb ) Some gets good grades, some gets little bad. But one thing to remember is that I did not get grade under 95. >>Who are you referring to "some" in your sentence? Now I'm going to tell you about four exam, so read carefully. >>Now I'm going to tell you about the four exams, so read carefully. (lack of article) If you have opportunity, visit our school. >>If you have an opportunity, visit our school. (lack of article) It is in Seoul, Korea. >>Good sentence! Guro, Sindorim. >>Make it a complete sentence. I'm in Sindorim Elementry school. >>Good sentence! There are two more other elementry schools in Sindorim. >>Good sentence! One is Mi-rae Elementry school, and other is Sinmirim Elementry school. >>One is Mi-rae Elementry school and the other is Sinmirim Elementry school. (lack of article) Okay, now I'm really going to tell you about the exams. >>Good sentence! First exam is Science exam. >>The first exam was a Science exam. (lack of article / verb tense) It was not hard. >>Good sentence! It was easy. Not just easy. Very easy. >>It was easy,not just easy but very easy. (punctuation mark) I get 20 grade. >>I got a grade of 20. (verb tense) It mean 100 grade. >>It means 100. (subject-verb agreement) In my class, they use to call 100 grade in to 20 grade. Because exam have 20 problems. >> In my class, they used to call 100 by 20 because the exam has 20 problems. (verb tense / subject-verb agreement) It make my privilege to other class's friend. Because if I said "I get 20 grade," they gasp. >>What do you mean? Then I said "It is 100 grade," they become angry because I fool them. >>Then I said "It is 100 ," they became angry because I fooled them. (verb tense) I did it one time and it was fun. >>Good sentence! Second and third exams are finals. >>The second and third exams are the fnals. (lack of article) They are hardship for many kids. But I overcame it. >>They are hardships for many kids but I overcame it. (pluralization / sentence construction) Second one is Korean, third one is math. >>The second one is Korean and the third one is Math. (lack of article) I get -4 in math. >>I got 4 in Math. (verb tense) It mean I get 96. >>It means I got 96. (verb tense) In Korean? I get 100. >>In Korean I got 100. (verb tense) Ji-woo and So-yean get 100 in Math. >>Ji-woo and So-yean got 100 in Math. (verb tense) Me, Sin-yang, and Hyo-ju >>Incomplete sentence. (She just transformed form other school last week. Because she moved in to Don-a Apartment number one. >>She transfered from another school last week because she moved into Don-a Apartment number 1. (choice of word) My average is 98. >>Good sentence! Ji-woo's averige is 97. Because, he gets 94 in Korean. >>Ji-woo's average is 97 because, he got 94 in Korean. (verb tense) I win him. >>I beat him. (choice of word) In first semester's finals, I loosed. Because in first semester, my average was 97 and Ji-woo got 97.5. >>In the first semester's finals, I lost because my average was 97 and Ji-woo got 97.5. (verb tense / lack of article / unnecessary words) It is just 0.5 grade difference. But today, I win by 1 grade. >>It is just 0.5 grade difference but today, I won by 1 point. (choice of word / sentence construction) Next is Math competition. >>Next is the Math competition. (lack of article) I did this exam today. >>Good sentence! It will be on tomorrow. >>It will be tomorrow. (unnecessary preposition) I want to get 100. >>Good sentence! 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