1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-12-03 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No.7-North Korea's rocket. 내 용 Do you know that? North Korea is going to launch the rocket. It is call Eun-ha number 3. But problem is that Maybe, it will be long-range missile. If it is long-range missile, that mean Korea will defeat. North Korea is saying that it is rocket. And they said "It is all safe." I can't trust them. Japan said they are going to intercept that rocket if it is going around Japanese Islands. Both Korea and Japan have same Aegis destroyer. But Japan's Aegis destroyer, they have SM3 missile. But Korea's Aegis destroyer, they have SM2 missile. SM3 missile can intercept both ballistic missile and combat plane. But Korea only can intercept combat plane. I think we have to make new missile, that can intercept ballistic missile. Like a Tomahawk or Patriot missile. Tomahawk missile is attack missile. Patriot missile is for defend. But thing is that this Tomahawk and Patriot is only in U.S.A. So I think it is bad for Korea. If this Eun-ha number 3 is real missile, it will be big issue for all over the world, because only world. Because world is very sensative at North Korea's missile. North Korea even have nuclear weapon. U.S.A. also have nuclear weapon, but not many. I saw picture of North Korea's nuclear weapon, I think it will be very powerful. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-12-04 답변내용 Do you know that? North Korea is going to launch the rocket. >>Do you know that North Korea is going to launch a rocket? (sentence construction / choice of article) It is call Eun-ha number 3. But problem is that Maybe, it will be long-range missile. >>It is called Eun-ha number 3. but the problem is that maybe it is a long-range missile. (sentence construction / word form / improper capitalization) If it is long-range missile, that mean Korea will defeat. >>If it is a long-range missile, that means Korea will be defeated. (lack of article / subjec-verb agreement) North Korea is saying that it is rocket. And they said "It is all safe." >>North Korea is saying that it is a rocket and they said "It is all safe." (lack of article / sentence construction) I can't trust them. >>Good sentence! Japan said they are going to intercept that rocket if it is going around Japanese Islands. >>Japan said they are going to intercept that rocket if it is going around the Japanese Islands. (lack of article) Both Korea and Japan have same Aegis destroyer. But Japan's Aegis destroyer, they have SM3 missile. But Korea's Aegis destroyer, they have SM2 missile. >>Both Korea and Japan have the same Aegis destroyer, but Japan's Aegis destroyeris the SM3 missile,but Korea's Aegis destroyer is the SM2 missile. (sentence construction / unnecessary words) SM3 missile can intercept both ballistic missile and combat plane. But Korea only can intercept combat plane. >>The SM3 missile can intercept both ballistic missiles and combat planes but Korea can only intercept combat planes. (sentence construction / word order / pluralization) I think we have to make new missile, that can intercept ballistic missile. Like a Tomahawk or Patriot missile. >>I think we have to make a new missile that can intercept ballistic missiles like a Tomahawk or Patriot missile. (lack of article / sentence construction) Tomahawk missile is attack missile. >> The Tomahawk missile is an attack missile. (lack of article) Patriot missile is for defend. But thing is that this Tomahawk and Patriot is only in U.S.A. So I think it is bad for Korea. >>The Patriot missile is for defense but Tomahawk and Patriot are only in the U.S.A. so I think it is bad for Korea. (lack of article / choice of word) If this Eun-ha number 3 is real missile, it will be big issue for all over the world, because only world. Because world is very sensative at North Korea's missile. >>If this Eun-ha number 3 is a real missile, it will be a big issue all over the world, because because world is very sensitive to North Korea's missile. (sentence construction / unnecessary words) U.S.A. also have nuclear weapon, but not many. >>The U.S.A even have nuclear weapons but not many. (lack of article) I saw picture of North Korea's nuclear weapon, I think it will be very powerful. >> I saw a picture of North Korea's nuclear weapon, I think it will be very powerful. (lack of article) Thanks for writing!