1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-11-29 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No.6-Star Wars 내 용 Today I’m going to tell you about Star Wars. I like this movie. It is very fun. The Episode 1 to 6 had been released. Star Wars have lots of Episode. Episode 1: The Phantom Menace (1999). Episode 2: Attack of the Clones. Episode 3: Revenge of the Sith. It was also made by Play station game too. In Episode 3, It is little brutal. Anakin Skywaker is fighting with his master Obi-wan Kenobi in lava pit, riding a boat. Then Anakin Skywaker’s leg cut off. And then, lava splash at his body. He starts to burn. Obi-wan left. Emperor found him. And turn him in to Darth Vader. It is very fun. Next is Star Wars Episode 4: A New hope. This new hope is Luke Skywaker. Son of Anakin Skywaker, who married with Padme. Padme dead when she heard Anakin Skywaker changed into Darth Vader. Episode 5: The Empire Strikes Back. This one’s director is different. I like Episode 3: Revenge of sith. Because in this Episode, Darth Vader was made. And there are many fights in this Episode. Now I will tell you about JEDI. There are many Jedis in Star Wars. Obi-wan, Yoda, Windu, Kit Fisto, Qui-gon, and many others. In Episode 3, Obi-wan fight with General Greibos and Anakin. And Windu, Kit Fisto is fight with Emperor. I think it is very fun. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-11-30 답변내용 Today I’m going to tell you about Star Wars. >>Good sentence! I like this movie. >>Good sentence! It is very fun. >>Good sentence! The Episode 1 to 6 had been released. >>Episode 1 to 6 had been released. (unnecessary word) Star Wars have lots of Episode. >>Star Wars has lots of Episode. (subject-verb agreement) Episode 1: The Phantom Menace (1999). Episode 2: Attack of the Clones. Episode 3: Revenge of the Sith. >>Good sentence! It was also made by Play station game too. >>A playstation game was also made. (word order / intended message) In Episode 3, It is little brutal. >>Episode 3 is a little brutal. (sentence construction / lack of article) Anakin Skywaker is fighting with his master Obi-wan Kenobi in lava pit, riding a boat. >>Anakin Skywaker is fighting with his master Obi-wan Kenobi in a lava pit, riding a boat. (lack of article) Then Anakin Skywaker’s leg cut off. And then, lava splash at his body. >>Then Anakin Skywaker’s leg is cut off and then lava splashes at his body. (lack of verb) He starts to burn. >>Good sentence! Obi-wan left. >>Good sentence! Emperor found him. And turn him in to Darth Vader. >>The emperor found him and turned him in to Darth Vader. (lack of article) It is very fun. >>Good sentence! Next is Star Wars Episode 4: A New hope. >>Good sentence! This new hope is Luke Skywaker. Son of Anakin Skywaker, who married with Padme. >>This new hope is Luke Skywaker, the son of Anakin Skywaker, who married with Padme. (sentence construction) Padme dead when she heard Anakin Skywaker changed into Darth Vader. >>Padme dead when she heard Anakin Skywaker changed into Darth Vader. Episode 5: The Empire Strikes Back. >>Good sentence! This one’s director is different. >>Good sentence! I like Episode 3: Revenge of sith. Because in this Episode, Darth Vader was made. And there are many fights in this Episode. >>I like Episode 3: Revenge of sith because in this Episode, Darth Vader was made and there are many fight scenes in this Episode. (sentence construction) Now I will tell you about JEDI. >>Good sentence! There are many Jedis in Star Wars. Obi-wan, Yoda, Windu, Kit Fisto, Qui-gon, and many others. >>There are many Jedis in Star Wars such as Obi-wan, Yoda, Windu, Kit Fisto, Qui-gon, and many others. (sentence construction) In Episode 3, Obi-wan fight with General Greibos and Anakin. And Windu, Kit Fisto is fight with Emperor. >>In Episode 3, Obi-wan fights with General Greibos and Anakin and Windu, Kit Fisto fights with the Emperor. (verb tense) I think it is very fun. >>Good sentence!