1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-11-28 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No.5-combat plane 내 용 Today’s topic is about combat plane. I like combat plane. I like tank and vulcan too, but mostly I like combat plane. Today’s combat planes are F-15SE Silence Eagle, Euro fighter, F-35 Lightning II, F-22 Raptor. This four are super combat planes. But thing is that except F-22 Raptor and Euro fighter, other planes are in development stage. It means it is not real, so remember that. The good thing is this all of this planes are next generation planes. First F-15SE Silence Eagle. F-14 Tomcat, F-15E Eagle, F-15E Strike Eagle, F-15K Slam Eagle and F-16 Fighting falcon are very old. But F-15SE is just like new version. It has Missile cover. Most of the planes have Missile under the wing. This is very big problem. Because, Radar can sense that. But this plane has Missile cover that can block the radar. It is wonderful. Next is F-22 Raptor. I like this plane. It is stealth combat plane. It can fly Mach 2. I think it is very fast. It has six Aim-120 Missiles, two Aim-side Winder Missiles and lots of bombs. I like this plane. Third plane is Euro fighter. I hate this plane’s design. It have vertical tail is in front. So I think it can crash easily. Last combat plane is F-35 Lightning II. It is rapidly getting a spotlight. I think conglomerate Lockheed Martin can earn lots of revenue. It is little slower than F-22 Raptor. It can fly Mach 1.8. It is Mach 0.2 slower than F-22 Raptor. It has two 2000 pound JDAM bombs, eight small bombs, four Am Lamb Missiles. Its momentum is not so good. I want one of this combat plane. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-11-30 답변내용 Today’s topic is about combat plane. >>Today’s topic is about combat planes. (pluralization) I like combat plane. >>I like combat planes. (pluralization) I like tank and vulcan too, but mostly I like combat plane. >>I like tank and vulcan too, but I like combat planes the most. (intended message) Today’s combat planes are F-15SE Silence Eagle, Euro fighter, F-35 Lightning II, F-22 Raptor. >>Good sentence! This four are super combat planes. But thing is that except F-22 Raptor and Euro fighter, other planes are in development stage. >>Those four are super combat planes except F-22 Raptor and Euro fighter, those planes are in the development stage. (choice of word / intended message) It means it is not real, so remember that. >>Good sentence! The good thing is this all of this planes are next generation planes. >>The good thing is that all of those planes are next generation planes. (choice of word) First F-15SE Silence Eagle. F-14 Tomcat, F-15E Eagle, F-15E Strike Eagle, F-15K Slam Eagle and F-16 Fighting falcon are very old. But F-15SE is just like new version. >>Construct this sentence again. It has Missile cover. >>It has a Missile cover. (lack of article) Most of the planes have Missiles under the wing. >>Good sentence! This is very big problem. Because, Radar can sense that. But this plane has Missile cover that can block the radar. >>This is a very big problem because, the Radar can sense that but this plane has a Missile cover that can block the radar. (lack of article /s entence construction) It is wonderful. >>Good sentence! Next is F-22 Raptor. >>Good sentence! I like this plane. >>Good sentence! It is stealth combat plane. >>It is a stealth combat plane. (lack of article) It can fly Mach 2. >>Good sentence! I think it is very fast. >>Good sentence! It has six Aim-120 Missiles, two Aim-side Winder Missiles and lots of bombs. >>Good sentence! I like this plane. >>Good sentence! Third plane is Euro fighter. >>The third plane is Euro fighter. (lack of article) I hate this plane’s design. >>Good sentence! It have vertical tail is in front. So I think it can crash easily. >>It has a vertical tail in front so I think it can crash easily. (subject-verb agreement / unnecessary verb) Last combat plane is F-35 Lightning II. >>The last combat plane is F-35 Lightning II. (lack of article) It is rapidly getting a spotlight. >>Good sentence! I think conglomerate Lockheed Martin can earn lots of revenue. >>I think the conglomerate Lockheed Martin can earn lots of revenue. (lack of article) It is little slower than F-22 Raptor. >>It is a little slower than F-22 Raptor. (lack of article) It can fly Mach 1.8. >>Good sentence! What is Mach? It is Mach 0.2 slower than F-22 Raptor. >>Good sentence! It has two 2000 pound JDAM bombs, eight small bombs, four Am Lamb Missiles. >>It has two 2000 pound JDAM bombs, eight small bombs and four Am Lamb Missiles. (lack of conjunction) Its momentum is not so good. >>Good sentence! I want one of this combat plane. >>I want one of those combat planes. (choice of word pluralization)