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In November 25th~26th, People who wants to be a president have to registrat that he or she wants to be a president candidate. And in December 16th, it is election day. But just yesterday, Park Geun-Hye's approval rates is 40% and Moon Jae-in and Ahn Cheul-soo's approval rates was 30% each. So if they don't combine and made one candidate, maybe, they will win. It is call unification. But problem is that who will be the one candidate? I hope it will be Ahn Cheul-soo. I watched the tv yesterday night. It was about Ahn and Moon's unification. It is debate. Bad thing is this evening Ahn Cheul-soo announced that he will resign. I was very surprised. It mean that Ahn candidate will not be on the president election. I was little sad. But not misrable. I think I have to support Moon Jae-in. Because Park Geun-Hye is not good for president. And I don't like her electoion pledge. So I just want to support Moon Jae-in. Just like dad.
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In November 25th~26th, People who wants to be a president have to registrat that he or she wants to be a president candidate. >>On November 25 and 26 people who want to be the president have to file their certificate of candidacy. (intended message / subject-verb agreement) And in December 16th, it is election day. But just yesterday, Park Geun-Hye's approval rates is 40% and Moon Jae-in and Ahn Cheul-soo's approval rates was 30% each. So if they don't combine and made one candidate, maybe, they will win. >>December 16 is the election day, but just yesterday, Park Geun-Hye's approval rate is 40% and Moon Jae-in and Ahn Cheul-soo's approval rates were 30% each so if they don't combine and choose one candidate, maybe, they will win. (intended message) It is call unification. But problem is that who will be the one candidate? >>It is called unification ,but the problem is who will be the only candidate? (sentence construction / lack of article) I hope it will be Ahn Cheul-soo. >>Good sentence! I watched the tv yesterday night. >>I watched tv last night. (unnecessary article / choice of word) It was about Ahn and Moon's unification. >>Good sentence! It is debate. Bad thing is this evening Ahn Cheul-soo announced that he will resign. >>It was a debate and the bad thing about it was that Ahn Cheul-soo announced that he will no longer run in the election. (sentence construction / intended message) I was very surprised. >>Good sentence! It mean that Ahn candidate will not be on the president election. >>It means that will not be a presidential candidate anymore. (intended message) I was little sad. But not misrable. >>I was a little sad, but not miserable. (lack of article / spelling) I think I have to support Moon Jae-in. Because Park Geun-Hye is not good for president. >>I think I have to support Moon Jae-in because Park Geun-Hye will not be a good president. (intended message) And I don't like her electoion pledge. So I just want to support Moon Jae-in. Just like dad. >>I don't like her election pledge so I just want to support Moon just like dad. (sentence construction) Thanks for writing! Have a great week ahead!