1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-11-22 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No.2 내 용 Today’s topic is typhoon or hurricane. I think hurricane or typhoon is very dangerous thing. In Korea, there were three typhoons. Bolaven, Tembin, Sanba. Bolaven is 15th, Tembin is 14th, and Sanba is 16th. Tembin made first. But Bolaven was first typhoon that strike Korea in this summer. Because, Bolaven was lot stronger than Tembin. So Bolaven beat Sanba and came to Korea first. But in U.S.A., they call typhoon as hurricane. In Australia, they call willy-willy. Some place call cyclone. I think it is hard to call. I think we have to start about hurricane Sandy and Katrina. First Katrina. Katrina was hurricane that stroked in 2005. It was long times ago. It is 7 years ago. It was awful. That hurricane cause 1,833 fatalities and $108 billion damage to southeastern states of the U.S., including, Louisiana. I searched on the internet, that, Katrina was very big hurricane. It was the worse hurricane in United States of America history. Second worse hurricane is Hurricane Sandy. Atlantic hurricane on record. The hurricane caused 185 fatalities and about $ 52.4 billion damage to this region. I think it was very powerful. Not any Korean typhoon can’t kill people more than 100. I was amazed that Shark had appeared in the New Jersey. Because of the flood, Shark swam from oceans. Or maybe, because of typhoon, he will fly from ocean. I’m also surprised because of bow and arrows. People want to stop looting and robberies. But security was not good. So they use gun, baseball bat, and even bow and arrows. I think it is fun and also very wonderful. Because, in Korea, people can’t use gun or bow or arrows. I hope it will be okay. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-11-23 답변내용 Today’s topic is typhoon or hurricane. >>Good sentence! I think hurricane or typhoon is very dangerous thing. >>Good sentence! In Korea, there were three typhoons. Bolaven, Tembin, Sanba. >>In Korea, there were three typhoons such as Bolaven, Tembin, Sanba. (sentence construction) Bolaven is 15th, Tembin is 14th, and Sanba is 16th. >>Bolaven is the 15th, Tembin is the 14th and Sanba is the 16th. (lack of article) Tembin made first. But Bolaven was first typhoon that strike Korea in this summer. Because, Bolaven was lot stronger than Tembin. So Bolaven beat Sanba and came to Korea first. But in U.S.A., they call typhoon as hurricane. >>Please make sentences with ideas that are connected to one another. In Australia, they call willy-willy. >>In Australia, they call it willy-willy. (lack of pronoun) Some place call cyclone. >>In some places they call it cyclone. (intended message) I think it is hard to call. >>What do you mean? I think we have to start about hurricane Sandy and Katrina. >>I think we have to start with hurricanes Sandy and Katrina. (choice of preposition) First Katrina. Katrina was hurricane that stroked in 2005. >>First Katrina. Katrina was hurricane that struck in 2005. (verb tense) It was long times ago. >>It was a long times ago. (lack of article) It is 7 years ago. >>It was 7 years ago. (verb tense) It was awful. >>Good sentence! That hurricane cause 1,833 fatalities and $108 billion damage to southeastern states of the U.S., including, Louisiana. >>That hurricane caused 1,833 fatalities and $108 billion damage to southeastern states of the U.S., including, Louisiana. (verb tense) I searched on the internet, that, Katrina was very big hurricane. >>I searched on the internet, that, Katrina was a very big hurricane. (lack of article) It was the worse hurricane in United States of America history. >>It was the worst hurricane in the history of America. (intended message / word order) Second worse hurricane is Hurricane Sandy. >>The second worst hurricane is hurricane Sandy. (lack of article / word form) Atlantic hurricane on record. >>It was the largest Atlantic hurricane on record. (incomplete thought) The hurricane caused 185 fatalities and about $ 52.4 billion damage to this region. >>Good sentence! I think it was very powerful. >>Good sentence! Not any Korean typhoon can’t kill people more than 100. >>No Korean typhoon can kill more than 100 people. (intended message) I was amazed that Shark had appeared in the New Jersey. Because of the flood, >>I was amazed that Shark appeared in New Jersey because of the flood. (unnecessary word / sentence construction) Shark swam from oceans. Or maybe, because of typhoon, he will fly from ocean. >>Sharks swam from the oceans or maybe because of the typhoon they were washed away from the ocean. (intended message) I’m also surprised because of bow and arrows. >>I’m also surprised because of the bow and arrows. (lack of article) People want to stop looting and robberies. But security was not good. So they use gun, baseball bat, and even bow and arrows. >>People want to stop looting and robberies but the security was not good so they used guns, baseball bats and even bows and arrows. (sentence construction / pluralization) I think it is fun and also very wonderful. Because, in Korea, people can’t use gun or bow or arrows. >>I think it is fun and also very wonderful because, in Korea, people can’t use guns or bows or arrows. (sentence construction / pluralization) I hope it will be okay. >>Good sentence! Thanks for writing! Have a great weekend!