1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-11-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dc diary No.1 내 용 I think today's title is little weird, but I will just write. Dc is my name. Dao. I can't tell you about c. Today, I'm going to write about what happened at school. Wednesday is my best day. Except that I was little sick today. I'm having a cold. I'm very tired. I'm also very toilsome. Now it is little better than yester day. I had a cold at yester day. At school, first we did physical education. It was fun. We played dodge ball. I'm little sicked than. So I was not very active. I dead three time. But it is okay to me. Next was math class. I like math. We learned about number's range, and number's estimate. It is hard, I think, but I solved it well. Next time was library time. Studnets are widespread in library. I want to overtake Sin yang's book reports, but I don't have any time. If I overtake Sin yang's book reports, I think it can enhase my knowledge. Then I think I have to investment some times, but I can't. Fourth class was computer class. But I can't play games. We have to search some imformations about where we want to go. Also we have to search news about concentration of population. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-11-22 답변내용 I think today's title is little weird, but I will just write. >>I think today's title is a little weird, but I will just write. (lack of article) Dc is my name, Dao. >>Good sentence! I can't tell you about c. >>Good sentence! Today, I'm going to write about what happened at school. >>Good sentence! Wednesday is my best day.Except that I was little sick today. >>Wednesday is the best day for me, althought, I was a little sick today. (intended message / choice of word / lack of article) I'm having a cold. >>I have a cold. (verb tense) I'm very tired. >>Good sentence! I'm also very toilsome. >>Good sentence! Now it is little better than yester day. >>Now it is a little better than yesterday. (lack of article / yesterday is one word) I had a cold at yester day. >>I had a cold yesterday. (unnecessary preposition / yesterday is one word) At school, first we did physical education. >>At school, first we had a P.E. class. (intended message) It was fun. >>Good sentence! We played dodge ball. >>Good sentence! I'm little sicked than. So I was not very active. >>I'm was a little sick that time so I was not very active. (verb tense) I dead three time. But it is okay to me. >>I was out three times but it was okay with me. (intended message) Next was math class. >>Good sentence! I like math. >>Good sentence! We learned about number's range and number's estimate. >>Good sentence! It is hard, I think, but I solved it well. >>I think it is hard but I solved it well. (word order) Next time was library time. >>Next was library time. (unnecessary word) Studnets are widespread in library. >>Students were widespread in library. (verb tense) I want to overtake Sin yang's book reports, but I don't have any time. >>Good sentence! If I overtake Sin yang's book reports, I think it can enhase my knowledge. >>If I overtake Sin yang's book reports, I think it can enhance my knowledge. (spelling) Then I think I have to investment some times, but I can't. >>Then I think I have to investment some time, but I can't. Fourth class was computer class. But I can't play games. >>The fourth class was the computer class but I couldn't play games. (sentence construction) We have to search some imformations about where we want to go. >>We have to search pieces of information about where we want to go. (pluralization) Also we have to search news about concentration of population. >>We also have to search news about concentration of population. (word order) Thanks for writing! Have a great evening!