1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-11-16 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 My favorite singers 내 용 Today I'm going to write about my favorite singers. Because today article's title was "Lee hi's Solo Career to Bee on the lookout for" It is like this. I haven't listened Lee hi's song but, article said, her voice is attractive and soulful. But she failed at K-Pop Star's knife-edged race for the top spot. Then YG Entertainment scout her. So she is now in YG Entertainment. The trade marks of YG Entertainment are 2NE1, Big Bang, Psy. Most of my favorite singers is in YG Entertainment. My favorite singers are 2NE1, Big Bang, Psy, f(x), T-ara. Bing Bang - I like this group because this group sang "Fantastic Baby" and "Monster" and many other songs. I like Fantastic Baby most. It is really exciting song. 2NE1 - I like this group because I like only this song. "I am the best" I don't know about this group very well. f(x) - I like f(x)'s song, it is very shocking. Like "Pinochio", "Electric Shocks" and many others. Psy - I'm very curious of this singer. Psy, just like Lee, he is solo singer. I was anticipated about him. I was anticipated at Gangnam Style and Korea. Both of them are very simmilar and fun song. T-ara - I think T-ara have to revample some songs. Because it is to fast. When I was 10, I danced Roly-Poly at school festival. It was to fast. But I like Roly-Poly and Cry-Cry. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-11-19 답변내용 Today I'm going to write about my favorite singers. Because today article's title was "Lee hi's Solo Career to Bee on the lookout for". >>Today I'm going to write about my favorite singers because today's article's title was "Lee hi's Solo Career to Bee on the lookout for". (sentence construction / possessive form) It is like this. >>Good sentence! I haven't listened Lee hi's song but, article said, her voice is attractive and soulful. But she failed at K-Pop Star's knife-edged race for the top spot. >>I haven't listened to Lee hi's song but the article said, her voice is attractive and soulful but she failed at K-Pop Star's knife-edged race for the top spot. (lack of preposition / sentence construction) Then YG Entertainment scout her. So she is now in YG Entertainment. >>Then YG Entertainment scouted her so she is now in YG Entertainment. (verb tense / sentence construction0 The trade marks of YG Entertainment are 2NE1, Big Bang, Psy. >>The famous stars of YG Entertainment are 2NE1, Big Bang and Psy. (choice of words) Most of my favorite singers is in YG Entertainment. >>Most of my favorite singers are in YG Entertainment. (verb) My favorite singers are 2NE1, Big Bang, Psy, f(x), T-ara. >>My favorite singers are 2NE1, Big Bang, Psy, f(x) and T-ara. (lack of conjunction) Bing Bang - I like this group because this group sang "Fantastic Baby" and "Monster" and many other songs. >>Bing Bang - I like this group because this group sang "Fantastic Baby", "Monster" and many other songs. (unnecessary conjunction) I like Fantastic Baby most. >> I like Fantastic Baby the most. (lack of article) It is really exciting song. >> It is really an exciting song. (lack of article) 2NE1 - I like this group because I like only this song."I am the best". >>2NE1 - I like this group because I like only the song "I am the best". (choice of word) I don't know about this group very well. >>I don't know this group very well. (unnecessary word) f(x) - I like f(x)'s song, it is very shocking. >>Good sentence! Like "Pinochio", "Electric Shocks" and many others. >>I like the songs "Pinochio", "Electric Shocks" and many others. (sentence construction) Psy - I'm very curious of this singer. >>Psy - I'm very curious about this singer. (choice of preposition) Psy, just like Lee, he is solo singer. >>Psy, just like Lee, he is a solo singer. (lack of article) I was anticipated about him. >>What do you mean? I was anticipated at Gangnam Style and Korea. Both of them are very simmilar and fun song. >>What do you mean? T-ara - I think T-ara have to revample some songs. Because it is to fast. >>T-ara - I think T-ara has to revamp some songs because some are too fast. (sentence construction / subject-verb agreement /spelling) When I was 10, I danced Roly-Poly at school festival. >>When I was 10, I danced Roly-Poly at a school festival. (lack of article) It was to fast. But I like Roly-Poly and Cry-Cry. >>It was too fast but I like Roly-Poly and Cry-Cry. (sentence construction) Good job! Keep writing!