1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-11-12 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 My favorite season 내 용 Do you know when is my favorite season? It is winter. I like winter because I like to drink hot chcolate. I want to make a snow man. Actually I like snow. I can make a heart with snow. It is very fun. Winter is December to Febuary. It is three month. Now it is autum. Or fall. I Semptember to November is fall. It is three month too. I hate fall because I hate autumn foliage, and I hate persimmons So today we are gonna talk about Winter. Winter's good things are snow, Christmas, hot chocolate, and many other things. First snow. We can make snow man out of snow. We can play snow fight. We can ski, snow board. Next thing is Christmas. There are many things that I want to get. New game CD, New bike, New labtop, Lego Star Wars, and many other things. So here is my wish list. 1. New game CD - I want to get Basket ball game CD. 2. New labtop - My labtop is not mine so, I want get one. 3. Lego Star Wars - In home plus, there was Jabba's palace, Naboo starfighter, and many other. So I want to get it. 4. More laboratory tools. - I want to do more exprience. And so on... Next thing is hot chocolate. It is characteristic of Winter. I like mom maded hot chocolate. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-11-14 답변내용 Do you know when is my favorite season? >>Do you know what my favorite season is? (choice of word / word order) It is winter. >>Good sentence! I like winter because I like to drink hot chcolate. >>Good sentence! I want to make a snow man. >>Good sentence! Actually I like snow. >>Good sentence! I can make a heart with snow. >>Good sentence! It is very fun. >>Good sentence! Winter is December to Febuary. >>Good sentence! It is three month. >>It lasts for three months. (intended message) Now it is autum. Or fall. >>Now, it is autumn or fall. (sentence construction) I Semptember to November is fall. >>September to November is fall. (spelling) It is three month too. >>It last for three months, too. (intended message) I hate fall because I hate autumn foliage, and I hate persimmons So today we are gonna talk about winter. >>I hate fall because I hate autumn foliage and I hate persimmons ,so today we are gonna talk about winter. (improper capitalization) Winter's good things are snow, Christmas, hot chocolate, and many other things. >>The good thing about winter is that I can enjoy many things like playing in the snow, drinking hot chocolate, etc. (intended message) First snow. >>The first thing I like about winter is snow. (incomplete thought) We can make snow man out of snow. >>We can make a snow man out of snow. (lack of article) We can play snow fight. >>Good sentence! We can ski, snow board. >>We can ski and snow board. (lack of conjunction) Next thing is Christmas. >>The next thing I like about winter is Christmas. (incomplete thought) There are many things that I want to get. New game CD, New bike, New labtop, Lego Star Wars, and many other things. So here is my wish list. >>There are many things that I want to get like a new game CD,bike,laptop, Lego Star Wars and many other things, so here is my wish list. (improper capitalization / sentence construction) 1. New game CD - I want to get Basket ball game CD. >>New game CD - I want to get a Basket ball game CD. (lack of article) 2. New labtop - My labtop is not mine so, I want get one. >>New laptop - The laptop I'm using is not mine, so I want to get one. (spelling / intended message) 3. Lego Star Wars - In home plus, there was Jabba's palace, Naboo starfighter, and many other. So I want to get it. >>Lego Star Wars - In home plus, there were items like Jabba's palace, Naboo starfighter and many others, so I want to get them. (sentence construction) 4. More laboratory tools. - I want to do more exprience. >>More laboratory tools. - I want to do more experiments. (choice of word) Next thing is hot chocolate. >>The next thing I like about winter is hot chocolate. (incomplete thought) It is characteristic of Winter. >>What do you mean? I like mom maded hot chocolate. >>I like it when my mom prepares hot chocolate. (intended message) I hope you'll get all the things in your wishlist. Thanks for writing!