1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-11-07 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 My dad 내 용 Today I'm going to write about my father. He is very good man. I think he is the bestest man in the world. His name is David. He is good at anything. First thing, sports. He is good at soccer, maraton, cycle, baseball, basketball and golf. In maraton, he get many medals. Gold, Silver, Bronze all of it. He know the basketball players like a coach. Second, he is good at computer. He use Micro Soft program very well, like Excel, Powerpoint, Word or something like that. Also he can make computer apart and fabrication it again. He is like a computer expert. He is now studing about Specialist course of computer security. I'm very proud that my father is expert. Third thing, is that he is really brainy at math. I think he has a math power in his body, because he is so awsome when he help me with the math problem. Lastly, he plays with me and my brother on weekend. We played board game, Play station, excercise and many other things. I think my dad is best man in the world. I love my father. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-11-09 답변내용 Today I'm going to write about my father. >>Good sentence! He is very good man. >>He is a very good man. (lack of article) I think he is the bestest man in the world. >>I think he is the best man in the world. (adjective) His name is David. >>Good sentence! He is good at anything. >>Good sentence! First thing, sports. >>Good sentence! He is good at soccer, maraton, cycle, baseball, basketball and golf. >>He is good at soccer, marathon, cycling, baseball, basketball and golf. (spelling) In maraton, he get many medals. Gold, Silver, Bronze all of it. >>In marathon, he got many medals, gold, silver and bronze. (spelling) He know the basketball players like a coach. >>He knows the basketball players like a coach. (subject-verb agreement) Second, he is good at computer. >>Good sentence! He use Micro Soft program very well, like Excel, Powerpoint, Word or something like that. >> He uses Micro Soft programs very well, like Excel, Powerpoint, Word etc. (subject-verb agreement) Also he can make computer apart and fabrication it again. >>What do you mean? He is like a computer expert. >>Good sentence! He is now studing about Specialist course of computer security. >>He is now taking a specialist course in computer security. (choice of word) I'm very proud that my father is expert. >>I’m very proud that my father is an expert. (lack of article) Third thing, is that he is really brainy at math. >>Third, he is really good at math. (choice of word) I think he has a math power in his body, because he is so awsome when he help me with the math problem. >> I think he has a math power in his body, because he is so awesome when he helps me with math problems. (spelling) Lastly, he plays with me and my brother on weekend. >>Good sentence! We played board game, Play station, excercise and many other things. >> We play a board game, Play station, exercise and many other things. (verb tense) I think my dad is best man in the world. >>I think my dad is the best man in the world. (lack of article) I love my father. >>Good sentence! I think your dad is really a good father. Thanks for writing about him!