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Today at school, me and my classmates had English class. It was very fun. Now I'm going to tell you about today's English class. First, we studied about color. Asking, "What color is it?" and answering "It is yellow." We learned a song too. It was good song. Sky is blue, grass is green, apple is red, sun is yellow and stuff like that. I didn't like song but, I sang it. Next, we played game. It is little fun game. If it say one color, than, the people who have that color paper have to change the sits. It was fun. My color was red. Next game was like this. If someone do something that resemble a color, than other players have to speak correct answer. I was resembled red. Ji-won resembled black. Teacher resembled red too. I think it was not fun. But good thing is that next English class, we are going to play board game. Kind of Dinosaur board game I hope it will be fun. Also I waiting tomorrow. Because Tomorrow, we will have computer class, Phs Ed, Library time, and lastly, math time.
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Today at school, me and my classmates had English class. >>Today at school, my classmates and I had an English class. (lack of article) It was very fun. >>Good sentence! Now I'm going to tell you about today's English class. >>Good sentence! First, we studied about color. >>First, we studied about colors. (pluralization) Asking, "What color is it?" and answering "It is yellow." >> We learned a song too. >>Good sentence! It was good song. >>It was a good song. (lack of article) Sky is blue, grass is green, apple is red, sun is yellow and stuff like that. >> I didn't like song but, I sang it. >>I didn't like the song but, I sang it. (lack of article) Next, we played game. >>Next, we played a game. (lack of article) It is little fun game. >>The game was a little fun. (verb tense) If it say one color, than, the people who have that color paper have to change the sits. >>If the teacher says one color, then, those people who have that color gave to change seats. (intended message / spelling) It was fun. >>Good sentence! My color was red. >>Good sentence! Next game was like this. >>The next game was like this. (lack of article) If someone do something that resemble a color, than other players have to speak correct answer. >>If someone does something that resembles a color, then other players have to say the correct answer. (subject-verb agreement) I was resembled red. >>I resembled red. (unnecessary word) Ji-won resembled black. >>Good sentence! Teacher resembled red too. >>Our teacher resembled red, too. (lack of pronoun) I think it was not fun. But good thing is that next English class, we are going to play board game. >>I think it was not fun but good thing is that in our next English class, we are going to play a board game. (sentence construction / lack of preposition and article) Kind of Dinosaur board game . >>It is a kind of a dinosaur board game. (sentence construction) I hope it will be fun. >>Good sentence! Also I waiting tomorrow. Because Tomorrow, we will have computer class, Phs Ed, Library time, and lastly, math time. >>I am also excited for tomorrow because we will have a computer class, physical education and math classes and we also have library time. (sentence construction) Thanks for writing! I hope you had fun in your classes.