1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-10-30 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 FC Barcelona 내 용 Do you know the team FC Barcelona? Well, he is the best team on Primera Liga. There are David Villa, Lionel Messi, and many other player. But FC Barecelona was lose. By Chelsea. Chelsea is the best team on Champions league and Premiure League. In Premiure Legue, Chelsea is the first. Second is Manchester United. Third is Manchester city. Fourth is Toutnum, fiveth is Everton. Sixth is Arsenal. Sadly QPR(Queens Park Rangers) is twentyth. In QPR, there is Ji-sung Park. Twentyth is last. In Primera Liga, I am fan of FC Barcelona. It is becaus that Lionel Messi is in this team. In Premiure League, I am fan of Chelsea of course. But in Champions league, I am fan of FC Barcelona. Even though Chelsea win. It is because I don't know any player in Chealsea. But I know players in FC Barcelona. Lionel Messi and David Villa. Two of them are very popular and famous. I think Messi is the best player in the Champions League and Primera Liga. I hope FC Barcelona win on 2013. Becaus in 2011 and 2012, Reaal Madrid was the winner. So I want FC Barcelona to win. Also in Champions League, I hope FC Barcelona will win. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-11-01 답변내용 Do you know the team FC Barcelona? >>Good sentence! Well, he is the best team on Primera Liga. >>Well, it is the best team in Primera Liga. (choice of pronoun and preposition) There are David Villa, Lionel Messi, and many other player. >>There are players like David Villa, Lionel Messa and many others. (intended message / pluralization) But FC Barecelona was lose. By Chelsea. >>Unfortunately, FC Barcelona was defeated by Chelsea. (sentence construction) Chelsea is the best team on Champions league and Premiure League. >>Chelsea is the best team in the Champions league and Premiere League. (choice of preposition / lack of article) In Premiure Legue, Chelsea is the first. >> In the Premiere League, Chelsea is the first. (lack of article / spelling) Second is Manchester United. >>Good sentence! Third is Manchester city. >>Third is Manchester City. (capitalization) Fourth is Toutnum, fiveth is Everton. >>Fourth is Toutnum, fifth is Everton. (Spelling) Sixth is Arsenal. >>Good sentence! Sadly QPR(Queens Park Rangers) is twentyth. >>Sadly QPR(Queens Park Rangers) is at the twentieth spot. (spelling) In QPR, there is Ji-sung Park. >>Park Ji-sung is in QPR. (intended message) Twentyth is last. >>The twentieth is the last spot. (intended message) In Primera Liga, I am fan of FC Barcelona. >>In Primera Liga, I am a fan of FC Barcelona. (lack of article) It is becaus that Lionel Messi is in this team. >>It is because Lionel Messi is in this team. (spelling / unnecessary word) In Premiure League, I am fan of Chelsea of course. But in Champions league, I am fan of FC Barcelona. >>In the Premiere League, I am a fan of Chelsea of course,but in theChampions league, I am a fan of FC Barcelona,even though Chelsea wins. (lack of article / spelling / sentence construction) It is because I don't know any player in Chealsea. But I know players in FC Barcelona. Lionel Messi and David Villa. >>It is because I don't know any player in Chealsea but I know players in FC Barcelona like Lionel Messi and David Villa. (sentence construction) Two of them are very popular and famous. >>The two of them are very popular and famous. (lack of article) I think Messi is the best player in the Champions League and Primera Liga. >>Good sentence! I hope FC Barcelona win on 2013. Becaus in 2011 and 2012, Reaal Madrid was the winner. So I want FC Barcelona to win. >>I hope FC Barcelona will win in 2013 because in 2011 and 2012, Real Madrid was the winner, so I want FC Barcelona to win. (verb tense / choice of preposition / spelling / sentence construction) Also in Champions League, I hope FC Barcelona will win. >>I hope FC barcelona will also win in the Champions League. (word order) Thanks for writing! Have a great weekend!