1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-10-23 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Tomorrow's academy 내 용 Tomorrow I have to go to academy. It is scince academy so, I like it. Tomorrow's topic is building dam. It is kind of long story so listen carefully. Let think we are engineer who can build dam. One day a 00 city's mayor call me "Please build dam in 00 city's river" So It is our misson to build a dam and defend a city from the flood. In my academy, there are lots of groups. I'm in group two. We have to work together and make dam. Like team work. We can plant seed too. I have to bring super glue. My friend will bring building block or wooden block. We will glue on them and make a dam. Pretty easy right? But It have to work good too. I think I have to prepare the glue-gun. It is very hot but it is good at sticking and hermetically. We have to hermetically the crack of the dam. It is not enough for just using super glue. But we have lots of plants. That mean plant will trap the water too. I think it will be the best dam in the academy. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-10-25 답변내용 Tomorrow I have to go to academy. >>Tomorrow I have to go to the academy. (lack of article) It is scince academy so, I like it. >>It is a Science academy so I like it. (lack of article / spelling) Tomorrow's topic is building dam. >>Tomorrow's topic is building a dam. (lack of article) It is kind of long story so listen carefully. >>The story is kinda long so listen carefully. (intended message) Let think we are engineer who can build dam. >>Let's think we are engineers who can build a dam. (pluralization / lack of article) One day a 00 city's mayor call me "Please build dam in 00 city's river" So It is our misson to build a dam and defend a city from the flood. >>One day the 00 city's mayor called me and said"Please build a dam in 00 city's river", so it is our misson to build a dam and defend the city from the flood. (use of articles) In my academy, there are lots of groups. >>Good sentence! I'm in group two. >>Good sentence! We have to work together and make dam. >>We have to work together and make a dam. (lack of article) Like team work. >>It is like a team work. (sentence constructioN) We can plant seed too. >>We can plant seeds, too. (pluralization) I have to bring super glue. >>Good sentence! My friend will bring building block or wooden block. >>My friend will bring building blocks or wooden blocks. (pluralization) We will glue on them and make a dam. >>We will glue them and make a dam. (unnecessary preposition) Pretty easy right? but It have to work good too. >>Good sentence! I think I have to prepare the glue-gun. >>Good sentence! It is very hot but it is good at sticking and hermetically. >>It is very hot but it is good at sticking and sealing hermetically. (incomplete thought) We have to hermetically the crack of the dam. >>We have to seal hermetically the crack of the dam. (incomplete thought) It is not enough for just using super glue. But we have lots of plants. >>It is not enough to just use super glue,but we have lots of plants. (choice of preposition) That mean plant will trap the water too. >>That means plant will trap the water too. (subject-verb agreement) I think it will be the best dam in the academy. >>Good sentence! Hi there! Goodluck! I hope you and your group will be successful in making a dam!