1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-10-16 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Market place 내 용 Today was the interesting day. It is because that at school, we had a market play. But I think it was almost simmilar as market place. Our team was Coffe shop. We sold, espresso, caramel macchiato, Blue mountain(kind of coffee in korea), Cappuccino, Americano, waffle, cookie, hot choco, ice coffee, and lots of things for coffee shop. Other shop was clothes shop. They sold T-shirts, blue jeans, North Face, Millet, Lafuma and things. Other shop was super market, street food, friut store, stationery store. So I bought t-shirt, set menu(in street food), melon, pencil, ramen. Because of the coffee selling, we earn $180. It was lots of money. But bad thing is that fruit store earn $ 190. Our coffee was little expensive. like $5~$15. No less. But the thing is that not many people are visting. So we have to cut the prices down. Whew.. I want to do next time. Today we use was fake money but nex time I think I have to use some REAL money. Then I will be rich. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-10-17 답변내용 Today was the interesting day. >>Today was an interesting day. (choice of article) It is because that at school, we had a market play. But I think it was almost simmilar as market place. >>It is because at school, we had a market play,but I think it was almost similar as a real market place. (unnecessary word / spelling) Our team was Coffe shop. >>Our team managed a Coffee shop. (intended message / spelling) We sold, espresso, caramel macchiato, Blue mountain(kind of coffee in korea), Cappuccino, Americano, waffle, cookie, hot choco, ice coffee, and lots of things for coffee shop. >>We sold, espresso, caramel macchiato, Blue mountain(kind of coffee in korea), appuccino, Americano, waffle, cookie, hot choco, iced coffee and lots of things sold at a real coffee shop. (intended message) Other shop was clothes shop. >>The other shop was a clothes shop. (lack of article) They sold T-shirts, blue jeans, North Face, Millet, Lafuma and things. >>They sold T-shirts, blue jeans, North Face, Millet, Lafuma and many other things. (intended message) Other shop was super market, street food, friut store, stationery store. So I bought t-shirt, set menu(in street food), melon, pencil, ramen. Because of the coffee selling, we earn $180. >>Another shop was a super market with street food, fruitt store and stationary store so I bought t-shirt, set menu(from the street food store), melon, pencil, ramen because we earned $180 in selling coffee. (sentence construction / word order / verb tense) It was lots of money. But bad thing is that fruit store earn $ 190. >>It was a big amount of money, but the bad thing was that the fruit store earned $190. (choice of words / sentence construction / verb tense) Our coffee was little expensive. like $5~$15. No less. >>Our coffee was a little expensive like $5~$15. (lack of article) But the thing is that not many people are visting. So we have to cut the prices down. >>The problem was that not many people visited our shop so we had to cut the prices down. (sentence construction) Whew.. I want to do next time. >>I want to do it again next time. (incomplete thought) Today we use was fake money but nex time I think I have to use some REAL money. Then I will be rich. >>Today we used fake money but next time I think I have to use real money,then I will be rich. (verb tense / spelling)