1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-10-15 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 F-1 Grand prix winner 내 용 Do you know that yesterday(Sunday) was the day of F-1 Korean Grand Prix? It was awsome. On the first lap, Jenson Button and one Japan racer crashed. So they retired. I think it was bad. Japan racer's Machine has little problem with the right back tire. Then his tire pices flew to the Jenson Button's machine. So Jenson Button was surprised and they crashed toghether. It is kind of big mistake. But the other cars were good. Execpt Lewis Hamilton. His right part was stuck by grass. That was a bad luck for him. It is because that F-1 machines are very sensative. So if it has a little things to engine or something, it will explode. But good thing is that grass didn't get in to the Lewis Hamilton's machine, engine or tire. Now I will tell you about the winner. The winner was 1. S. Vettel 2. M. Webber 3. F. Alonso 4. P. Massa Vettel and webber are Red bull and Alonso and Massa is Ferrari. It is good that Red bull was winner. image view 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-10-16 답변내용 Do you know that yesterday(Sunday) was the day of F-1 Korean Grand Prix? >>Good sentence! It was awsome. >>It was awesome. (spelling) On the first lap, Jenson Button and one Japan racer crashed. So they retired. >> I think it was bad. >>Good sentence! Japan racer's Machine has little problem with the right back tire. >>Japan racer's Machine had a little problem with the right back tire. (verb tense) Then his tire pices flew to the Jenson Button's machine. So Jenson Button was surprised and they crashed toghether. >>Then his tire pieces flew to Jenson Button's machine , so Jenson Button was surprised and they crashed together. (spelling / sentence construction) It is kind of big mistake. But the other cars were good. Execpt Lewis Hamilton. >>It was a kinda big mistake but the other cars were good except Lewis Hamilton. (choice of word / sentence construction / spelling) His right part was stuck by grass. >>Grass was stuck on the right part. (sentence construction) That was a bad luck for him. >>Good sentence! It is because that F-1 machines are very sensative. So if it has a little things to engine or something, it will explode. But good thing is that grass didn't get in to the Lewis Hamilton's machine, engine or tire. >>It is because F-1 machines are very sensitive so if something enters the engine , it will explode,but the good thing was that the grass didn't get in to Lewis Hamilton's machine, engine or tire. (spelling / unnecessary article) Now I will tell you about the winner. >>Now I will tell you about the winners. (pluralization) The winner was >>The winners were.. (pluralization) 1. S. Vettel 2. M. Webber 3. F. Alonso 4. P. Massa Vettel and webber are Red bull and Alonso and Massa is Ferrari. >>Vettel and webber are from Red bull and Alonso and Massa are from Ferrari. (lack of preposition) It is good that Red bull was winner. >>It is good that Red bull was the winner. (lack of article) Thanks for writing! Ihope you would write more about your experiences.