1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-10-12 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 F-1 Korean Grand prix 내 용 October 12 to 14, there will be a F-1 Korean Grand Prix. It is mean Korea is in the good country. It is also known as 'Young-am F-1 race' I want to go there but. I can't. It is because that it is to expensive. Bad sites are $ 96 and good sites are $ 200. It is price of a little bike. The bike that I want is $ 280. In 2011, 1 Sebastian Vettel Red Bull 2 Lewis Hamilton McLaren-Mercedes 3 Mark Webber Red Bull 4 Jenson Button McLaren-Mercedes 5 Fernando Alonso Ferrari So now Red Bull team is on the first and next is McLaren-Mercedes, and third is Ferrari. It is because that Sebastian Vettle and Mark Webber are same team. Lewis Hamilton and Jenson Buttion are same team. So the third team is Ferrari. If Fernando Alonso was not on the team, Ferrari will not be on third. It is because there are other many teams too. Like Audi, Lotos or something like that. I wish Red Bull will win. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-10-15 답변내용 October 12 to 14, there will be a F-1 Korean Grand Prix. >>On October 12 to 14, the F-1 Korean Grand Prix will be held. (intended message) It is mean Korea is in the good country. >>It meas Korea is a good country. (intended message / choice of article) It is also known as 'Young-am F-1 race' . >>Good sentence! I want to go there but. I can't. >>I want to go there but I can't. (unnecessary punctuation mark) It is because that it is to expensive. >>It is because that is too expensive. (unnecessary word / spelling) Bad sites are $ 96 and good sites are $ 200. >>What do you mean? It is price of a little bike. >>It is the price of a little bike. (lack of article) The bike that I want is $ 280. >>Good sentence! In 2011, 1 Sebastian Vettel Red Bull 2 Lewis Hamilton McLaren-Mercedes 3 Mark Webber Red Bull 4 Jenson Button McLaren-Mercedes 5 Fernando Alonso Ferrari So now Red Bull team is on the first and next is McLaren-Mercedes, and third is Ferrari. >>So now the Red Bull team is on the first place and next is McLaren-Mercedes and third is Ferrari. (lack of article) It is because that Sebastian Vettle and Mark Webber are same team. >> It is because Sebastian Vettle and Mark Webber are in the same team. (lack of preposition and article) Lewis Hamilton and Jenson Buttion are same team. So the third team is Ferrari. >>Lewis Hamilton and Jenson Buttion are in the same team so the third team is Ferrari. (lack of preposition and article) If Fernando Alonso was not on the team, Ferrari will not be on third. >>Good sentence! It is because there are other many teams too. Like Audi, Lotos or something like that. >>It is because there are many other teams, too, like Audi, Lotos or something like that. (word order / sentence construction) I wish Red Bull will win. >>Good sentence! Thanks for writing! I hope you had a great weekend!