1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-10-10 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Back from school trip 내 용 I have been to school trip for three days. October 8 ~ October 10. So now I'm really tired. I have been to Gangwondo, Won-zoo. It is very far. It take two hours to go there. I stayed at the Youth hostel. It is called Chi-ack Dreamland Youth hostel. Why it is called Chi-ack Dreamland Youth hostel? It is because that infront of the Youth hostel, there is Chi-ack Mountain, and the company who made this Youth hostel is 'Dreamland.' So that's why it is called Chi-ack Dreamland Youth hostel. So now let me tell you about my story. First day, I have been to Chi-ack Mt. The top of this mountain is called Bi-Lo top. It is 1288 meters high. It is about 25% or about quater hight of Mt. Everest. Mt. Everest is 8848 meters high, so I think it is very tall. The first person who climbed Mt. Everest was Edmond Hillary and Tenzing Norgai. At that night. I haved a camp fire. It was very fun. We danced 'Gangnam Style' Like horse riding dance. Me and Alvin, Sin-yang, Ji-woo, and other friends. I loved this camp fire. Second day, I played pipe line, maze, and in to the ring. It was very fun. At that night, it was time for recriation. It was very fun. Dance, clap, and sang. I want to go next time. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-10-11 답변내용 I have been to school trip for three days. October 8 ~ October 10. So now I'm really tired. >>I went on a school trip for three days from October 8 to October 10, so now I'm really tired. (verb tense) I have been to Gangwondo, Won-zoo. >>I went to Won-zoo in Gangwondo. (verb tense / word order) It is very far. >>Good sentence! It take two hours to go there. >>It takes two hours to go there. (subject-verb agreement) I stayed at the Youth hostel. >>Good sentence! It is called Chi-ack Dreamland Youth hostel. >>Good sentence! Why it is called Chi-ack Dreamland Youth hostel? >>Why is it called Chi-ack Dreamland Youth hostel? (word order) It is because that infront of the Youth hostel, there is Chi-ack Mountain, and the company who made this Youth hostel is 'Dreamland.' So that's why it is called Chi-ack Dreamland Youth hostel. >>It is because the Chi-ack Mountain is front of the hotel and the company who made this Youth hostel is 'Dreamland that's why it is called Chi-ack Dreamland Youth hostel. (word order) So now let me tell you about my story. >>Now let me tell you about my story. (unnecessary word) First day, I have been to Chi-ack Mt. >>On the first day, I went to the Chi-ack Mt. (lack of preposition / verb tense) The top of this mountain is called Bi-Lo top. >>Good sentence! It is 1288 meters high. >>Good sentence! It is about 25% or about quater hight of Mt. Everest. >>It is about 25% or about quater the height of Mt. Everest. (lack of article / spelling) Mt. Everest is 8848 meters high, so I think it is very tall. >>Good sentence! The first person who climbed Mt. Everest was Edmond Hillary and Tenzing Norgai. >>The first people who climbed Mt. Everest were Edmond Hillary and Tenzing Norgai. (pluralization) At that night. I haved a camp fire. >>That night, we had a camp fire. (unnecessary preposition / verb tense) It was very fun. >>Good sentence! We danced 'Gangnam Style' Like horse riding dance. Me and Alvin, Sin-yang, Ji-woo, and other friends. >>Alvin, Sin-yang, Ji-woo danced Gangnam style together with other friends. (word order / sentence construction) I loved this camp fire. >>Good sentence! Second day, I played pipe line, maze, and in to the ring. >>On the second day, I played pipe line, maze and in to the ring. (lack of preposition) It was very fun. >>Good sentence! At that night, it was time for recriation. >>That night was a time for recreation. (sentence construction / spelling) It was very fun. Dance, clap, and sang. >>It was very fun to dance, clap and sing. (sentence construction) I want to go next time. >>I want to go there again next time. (incomplete thought) Thanks for writing! I hope you enjoyed your trip!