1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-10-03 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Car(1) 내 용 I bought a R/C car. It is remote control car. I bought it in Busan. It is Ferrari 458 Italy spider. I search on the internet. And It look same. I like my Ferrari 458 Italy spider R/C car. It is very fast, but it is little bad for the conner track. It is 27 Mhz. Color is white. BUt my friend Sin-yang's R/C car is ferrari 458 Italy too. But not spider, and his car color is yellow not white. The most good thing is that his car is 40 Mhz. So I can race with him. About two weeks ago, I raced with Sin-yang. But not used this car. I used R/C F-1, but now, F-1 is in the pit. It wrack. Because of the car acident. Sin-yang's car crash at me and wracked. That was bad thing. Because it was wonho's not mine. So now I will talk about wonho's new R/C. It is Audi R8. It is sports car. It is good at conner, but it is bad for the straight track. So I think I can win. I want to race with him someday. Good Chusuk~~ image view 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-10-04 답변내용 I bought a R/C car. >>Good sentence! It is remote control car. >>It is a remote controlled car. (lack of article) I bought it in Busan. >>Good sentence! It is Ferrari 458 Italy spider. >>Good sentence! I search on the internet. And It look same. >>I searched it on the internet and it looks the same. (verb tense / lack of pronoun) I like my Ferrari 458 Italy spider R/C car. >>Good sentence! It is very fast, but it is little bad for the conner track. >>What do you mean? It is 27 Mhz. Color is white. BUt my friend Sin-yang's R/C car is ferrari 458 Italy too. But not spider, and his car color is yellow not white. >>It is 27 Mhz and the color is white but my friend Sin-yang's R/C car is ferrari 458 Italy too but not spide and his car's color is yellow not white. (sentence construction) The most good thing is that his car is 40 Mhz. So I can race with him. >>The best thing about it is that his car is 40 Mhz so I can race with him. (choice of word) About two weeks ago, I raced with Sin-yang. But not used this car. >>About two weeks ago, I raced with Sin-yang but I did not use this car. I used R/C F-1, but now, F-1 is in the pit. >>Good sentence! It wrack. Because of the car acident. >>It was wrecked because of a car accident. (spelling / sentence construction) Sin-yang's car crash at me and wracked. >>Sin-yang's car crashed at me and wrecked. (verb tense) That was bad thing. Because it was wonho's not mine. >>That was a bad thing because it was Wonho's not mine. (lack of article) So now I will talk about wonho's new R/C. >>Now I will talk about Wonho's new R/C car. (capitalization) It is Audi R8. >>Good sentence! It is sports car. >>It is a sports car. (lack of article) It is good at conner, but it is bad for the straight track. So I think I can win. >>What is conner? Do you mean corner? I want to race with him someday. >>Good sentence! Thanks for writing!Keep up the good work!