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Do you like baseball? Base ball is my third favorite sport. First is basket ball second is soccer and lastly, base ball. I'm good at throwing, and good at catching too. I think I'm little bad at hitting. So My favorite basket ball player is Yao Ming. My favorite soccer players are GK: David De Gea MF: Park Ji-sung FW: Park Ju-young. My favorite base ball player is Chu Sin-su. He is now in Cleveland indians. I like Cleveland indians hat, execept I don't have it though. I have Texas Rangers's and Saint Louis Cardinals's hats. I think Major League is fun. <
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1. Texas Rangers I'm fan of Cleveland indians. In American League. But in National League, I'm fan of Pittsburgh Pirates. I like American League then Natonal League. Because there are lots of pouplar team in American League, and it is more fun. Pouplar teams are Cleveland indians, Saint Lois Cardinal, Texas Rangers, New york Yankies, and lastly Boston Red socks.
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Do you like baseball? >>Good sentence! Base ball is my third favorite sport. >>Good sentence! First is basket ball second is soccer and lastly, base ball. >>Good sentence! I'm good at throwing, and good at catching too. >>I'm good at throwing and catching, too. (unnecessary words) I think I'm little bad at hitting. >>I think I'm a little bad at hitting. (lack of article) So My favorite basket ball player is Yao Ming. >>My favorite basketball player is Yao Ming. (unnecessary word) My favorite soccer players are GK: David De Gea MF: Park Ji-sung FW: Park Ju-young. >>My favorite soccer players are GK David De Gea ,MF Park Ji-sung and FW Park Ju-young. (lack of conjunction) My favorite baseball player is Chu Sin-su. >> Good sentence! He is now in Cleveland indians. >>Good sentence! I like Cleveland indians hat, execept I don't have it though. >>I like Cleveland indians hat but I don't have it. (unnecessary words / intended message) I have Texas Rangers's and Saint Louis Cardinals's hats. >> I have Texas Rangers' and Saint Louis Cardinals' hats. (possessive form) I think Major League is fun. >>I think the Major League is fun. (lack of article) <
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1. New york Yankies >>New York Yankees. (capitalization / spelling)
1. Ditroide Tigers >>Detroit Tigers. (spelling)
1. Texas Rangers >>Good! I'm fan of Cleveland indians. >>I'm a fan of Cleveland indians. (lack of article) In American League. But in National League, I'm fan of Pittsburgh Pirates. >>What do you mean? like American League then Natonal League. Because there are lots of pouplar team in American League, and it is more fun. >>What do you mean? Pouplar teams are Cleveland indians, Saint Lois Cardinal, Texas Rangers, New york Yankies, and lastly Boston Red socks. >>The popular teams are Cleveland Indians, Saint Louis Cardinal, Texas Rangers, New york Yankies and lastly Boston Red Socks. (spelling) Thanks for writing! I hope you had a great weekend!