1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-09-27 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Sport day 내 용 Today at school, it was sport day. I play lot's of game there so I will tell you. First thing I have to tell you is 'preparation dance.' The song was 'Bingo. "Not B I NGO, B I NGO, B I NGO bingo is my name." It is korean song. It is kind of fun song. There are many rap. So it is difficult to sing. But it is easy to dance. Just clap, clap and kick, kick and turn, turn. It is very easy. Next thing I do is game. 1 hour is for 1,2 grades. Next 1 hour is for 3,4 grades. Lastly, 1 hour is for 5,6 grades. When Other grades are in the play ground and play game, another grades play in the class room. Play some board game or something. When I was out, I played limbo, 50m runnig, pick bean(using chopstick), building cattle, fliping pan, bisa chigy, carry water, and other stuff. It was really fun. Now it is blue VS. red (white). Throw ball, dance Gangnam Style. I was very fun. I want to do next year 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-09-28 답변내용 Today at school, it was sport day. >>Today was our school sports day. (sentence construction) I play lot's of game there so I will tell you. >>I played lot's of games there so I will tell you. (verb tense / pluralization) First thing I have to tell you is 'preparation dance.' >>The first thing that I have to tell you is the "preparation dance". (lack of article) The song was 'Bingo. >>Good sentence! "Not B I NGO, B I NGO, B I NGO bingo is my name." >>Good sentence! It is korean song. >> It is a Korean song. (lack of article / pluralization) It is kind of fun song. >>This song is kinda fun. (sentence construction) There are many rap. So it is difficult to sing. But it is easy to dance. >>There are many rap parts so it is difficult to sing but it is easy to dance. (sentence construction) Just clap, clap and kick, kick and turn, turn. >>Good sentence! It is very easy. >>Good sentence! Next thing I do is game. >>The next thing I did was play a game. (lack of article / verb tense) 1 hour is for 1,2 grades. >>1 hour is for the 1st and 2nd grade students. (intended message) Next 1 hour is for 3,4 grades. >>The next 1 hour is for the 3rd and 4th grade students. (intended message) Lastly, 1 hour is for 5,6 grades. >>Lastly, 1 hour is for the 5th and grade students. When Other grades are in the play ground and play game, another grades play in the class room. Play some board game or something. >>When the students in other grade levels were in the playground playing games, students from other grade levels played some board games or something else in the classroom. (verb tense / sentence construction) When I was out, I played limbo, 50m runnig, pick bean(using chopstick), building cattle, fliping pan, bisa chigy, carry water, and other stuff. >>When I was out, I played limbo, 50m running, pick bean(using chopstick), building a castle, flipping pan, bisa chigy, carry water and other stuff. (spelling) It was really fun. >>Good sentence! Now it is blue VS. red (white). >>Good sentence! Throw ball, dance Gangnam Style. >>They threw the ball and danced Gangnam Style. (verb tense / sentence construction) I was very fun. >>I really had fun. (intended message) I want to do next year >>I want to do those things againg next year. (incomplete sentence) Thanks for writing! I hope you enjoyed the sports day.