1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-09-24 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Science (1) 내 용 Do you like science? Science is my best subject. Today, I want to talk about scienece.My favorite kinds of science is physics and chemistry. Chemistry can do lot's of expreiments, and also I'm good at math. If you like math, you will like physics. You have to do lot's of calculate in physics. Do you think chemistry is better? Well, chemistry have lot's of thing memorize, or learn. There are other kinds of scince too. Like Earth science and biology. I don't like biology. Because that I'm little allergy to animal's fur, and I don't like touching animals. But I like plants thought. Now I will tell you about chemistry. Chemistry is not hard in elementry school. So I will tell you. First, let's talk about water. In the Earth there are three states of water. Liquid, gas, solid. It is very important. Okay most of the water are stay in liquid. But If the temperature gets too high, water turn in to gas. It is call water vapor. If the temperature gets too low, water turn in to solid. It is call ice, you know. In the about 500 years ago, Korea was called Chosun. In that time, ice was almost same as gold. I think it was bad time. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-09-25 답변내용 Do you like Science? >>Good sentence! Science is my best subject. >>Science is my favorite subject. (choice of word) Today, I want to talk about scienece. >>Today, I want to talk about science. (spelling) My favorite kinds of science is physics and chemistry. >>My favorite branches of science are physics and chemistry. (choice of word) Chemistry can do lot's of expreiments, and also I'm good at math. >>In chemistry, we can do lots of exp If you like math, you will like physics. >>Good sentence! You have to do lot's of calculate in physics. >>You have to do lots of calculations in physics. (choice of word) Do you think chemistry is better? >>Good sentence! Well, chemistry have lot's of thing memorize, or learn. >>In chemistry, there are many things to memorize or learn. There are other kinds of scince too. Like Earth science and biology. >>There are other branches of science too, like Earth science and biology. (sentence construction) I don't like biology. Because that I'm little allergy to animal's fur, and I don't like touching animals. But I like plants thought. >>I don't like biology because I'm little allergic to animal's fur and I don't like touching animals,but I like plants though. (sentence construction / choice Now I will tell you about chemistry. >>Good sentence! Chemistry is not hard in elementry school. So I will tell you. >>Chemistry is not hard in elementry school, so I will tell you. (sentence contruction) First, let's talk about water. >>Good sentence! In the Earth there are three states of water. Liquid, gas, solid. >>On Earth there are three states of water such as liquid, gas, solid. (choice of preposition / sentence construction) It is very important. >>Good sentence! Okay most of the water are stay in liquid. But If the temperature gets too high, water turn in to gas. >>Okay most of the water stay as liquid but if the temperature gets too high, water turns into gas. (sentence construction) It is call water vapor. >>It is called water vapor. (verb form) If the temperature gets too low, water turn in to solid. >>If the temperature gets too low, water turns in to solid. (subject-verb agreement) It is call ice, you know. >>It is called ice, you know. (verb form) In the about 500 years ago, Korea was called Chosun. >>500 years ago, Korea was called Chosun. (unnecessary words) In that time, ice was almost same as gold. >>During that time, ice was almost the same as gold. (choice of word) I think it was bad time. >>I think it was a bad time. (lack of article) Thanks for writing! You did really well.