1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-09-21 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Le Mans 내 용 Do you know Le Mans 24 hours racing? It is dangerous but, it is pouplar racing with F-1 racing. Do you know why this game is dangerous? It is because that this race run 24 hours. That mean you can't sleep. Because your riding a car. you have to run 13.48 km. It is one lap. So in 24 hours, what car will be run more distance. That is Le Mans 24 hour race. There are many cars in Le Mans 24 hour race. Puzzo, Audi, Cadilak, and other cars. Even korea's team Hankook Tire was also in this game. I think it will be fun. But Le Mans city is in the France. I don't have money to go France you know. So I think I have to search on the internet or watch on television. The good thing is that F-1 racing is will be held in Young-am. That is good thing. Because France trip will be cause more than 5000,000 won. It is about 5000 dollar. But F-1 racing ticket is 200,000 won is 200 dollar. It is more cheap than France trip. So I think I have ot watch F-1 game or maybe I can Le Mans 24 hours game. image view 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-09-24 답변내용 Do you know Le Mans 24 hours racing? >>Good sentence! It is dangerous but, it is pouplar racing with F-1 racing. >>It is dangerous but it is a popular race along with F-1. (spelling) Do you know why this game is dangerous? >>Good sentence! It is because that this race run 24 hours. >>It is because that this race runs 24 hours. (subject-verb agreement) That mean you can't sleep. Because your riding a car. >>That means you can't sleep because you are riding a car. (use of pronoun) you have to run 13.48 km. >>You have to drive 13.48 km. (capitalization / choice of word) It is one lap. So in 24 hours, what car will be run more distance. >>What do you mean by "what car will be run more distance."? That is Le Mans 24 hour race. >>Good sentence! There are many cars in Le Mans 24 hour race. Puzzo, Audi, Cadilak, and other cars. >>There are many cars in Le Mans 24 hour race like Puzzo, Audi, Cadilak and other cars. (sentence construction) Even korea's team Hankook Tire was also in this game. >>Even Korea's team Hankook Tire was also in this game. (capitalization) I think it will be fun. But Le Mans city is in the France. >> I think it will be fun but Le Mans city is in France. (unnecessary article) I don't have money to go France you know. So I think I have to search on the internet or watch on television. >>I don't have money to go to France you know,so I think I have to search on the internet or watch on television. (lack of preposition) The good thing is that F-1 racing is will be held in Young-am. >>The good thing is that F-1 racing will be held in Young-am. (unnecessary word) That is good thing. Because France trip will be cause more than 5000,000 won. >>That is a good thing because a trip to France will be cost more than 5, 000,000 won. (sentence construction / choice of word) It is about 5000 dollar. But F-1 racing ticket is 200,000 won is 200 dollar. >> It is about 5,000 dollars but the F-1 racing ticket is 200,000 won which is equivalent to 200 dollars. (sentence construction) It is more cheap than France trip. So I think I have ot watch F-1 game or maybe I can Le Mans 24 hours game. >>It is cheaper than a trip to France so I think I have to watch the F-1 game or maybe the Le Mans 24 hours game. ( sentence construction) Thanks for writing! Keep up the good work!