1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-09-20 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 F-1 Racing 내 용 Do you know F-1 racing? It is the most pouplar and difficurt racing in the world. Sebastian Vettel, Lewis Hamilton, Michael Schumacher,Mark Webber Fernando Alonso are F-1 racer. F-1 is very pouplar sports. It is one of the world 3 best sports. Others are World cup and Olympic. I like World cup most. But I like F-1 Grandprix too. In 2012, October 12th~14th, F-1 Grandprix will be played on Korea, Young-am. Grandprix winner 7:Lewis Hamilton-McLaren Mercedes 8:Fernando Alonso-Ferrari 257 9:Mark Webber-Red Bull Racing Renault 258 10:Fernando Alonso-Ferrari 257 11:Lewis Hamilton-McLaren Mercedes 12:Jenson Button-McLaren Mercedes 270 13:Lewis Hamilton-McLaren Mercedes I think I have to go Young-am F-1 racing track. But It is too expensive. Now I will tell you about F-1 track. It can divide by 3 kind. Super speed track, Super talent track, and lastly Super dangerous track. First track can speed up 300 to 320km/h. Super talent track need many talent to pass. Because there are many coner and left,right, left, right coner. Last track is very dangerous. Because that it has no fence. So if you run fast, maybe you can slide out to the track. image view 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-09-20 답변내용 Good evening! It's Autumn. All most birds fly to sky to go to warmer places. I'm very glad to see they move. However, in this article, some white cranes in Russia didn't go. However, Russian pressident is very good person. He is very respectable person. I have to respect he's animal love. I have to love my brother's iguana(?) more, like Vladimir Putin. Also, he can donate for people! I'm really happy to know him. Russia is lucky to have a good president. All of the country's pressident should respect him too. Right? Do you know F-1 racing? >>Good sentence! It is the most pouplar and difficurt racing in the world. >>It is the most popular and difficult race in the world. (spelling / word form) Sebastian Vettel, Lewis Hamilton, Michael Schumacher,Mark Webber Fernando Alonso are F-1 racer. >>Sebastian Vettel, Lewis Hamilton, Michael Schumacher,Mark Webber Fernando Alonso are F-1 racers. (pluralization) F-1 is very pouplar sports. >>F-1 is a very poplar sport. (lack of article / spelling) It is one of the world 3 best sports. >>It is one of the 3 best sports in the world. (word order) Others are World cup and Olympics. >>The others are World Cup and Olympics. (lack of article) I like World cup most. But I like F-1 Grandprix too. >>I like the World cup the most but I like the F-1 Grandprix too. (lack of article) In 2012, October 12th~14th, F-1 Grandprix will be played on Korea, Young-am. >>On October 12-14 , the F-1 Grandprix will be held in Korea at Young-am. (choice of preposition / word) Grandprix winner 7:Lewis Hamilton-McLaren Mercedes 8:Fernando Alonso-Ferrari 257 9:Mark Webber-Red Bull Racing Renault 258 10:Fernando Alonso-Ferrari 257 11:Lewis Hamilton-McLaren Mercedes 12:Jenson Button-McLaren Mercedes 270 13:Lewis Hamilton-McLaren Mercedes I think I have to go Young-am F-1 racing track. But It is too expensive. >>I think I have to go Young-am F-1 racing track, but It is too expensive. (sentence construction) Now I will tell you about F-1 track. >>Now I will tell you about the F-1 track. (lack of article) It can divide by 3 kind. Super speed track, Super talent track, and lastly Super dangerous track. >>It is divided ino 3 kinds the Super speed track, Super talent track and lastly the Super dangerous track. (lack of article) First track can speed up 300 to 320km/h. >>In the first track you can have a speed of 300 to 320 km/h. (intended message) Super talent track need many talent to pass. Because there are many coner and left,right, left, right coner. >>What do you mean "need many talent"? Last track is very dangerous. Because that it has no fence. So if you run fast, maybe you can slide out to the track. >>The last track is very dangerous because it has no fences so if you drive fast, maybe you can slide out of the track. (sentence construction) Thanks for writing! Now I know a lot about F1 racing.