1 A&Acapture 2014-12-29 2 answer 2014-11-14 3 Robot suit fight 9(finale) 2014-10-08 4 robot arm 2014-09-25 5 Teacher! 2014-08-28 6 Robot Suit Fight 8 2014-08-21 7 Robot suit fight 7 2014-08-06 8 Robot suit fight 6 2014-07-30 9 Robot suit fight 5 2014-07-23 10 robot suit 4 2014-07-14 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김찬호 작성일 2012-09-14 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 crazy Ji-woo. 내 용 Today I went to school. I have to go to school because that I am a student. Today I want to talk about my friend Ji-woo. He is my best friend. He acted weird today. So I want to tell you about this story. Story number one: It was math time. Our teacher was teaching us math of course. Then a cart roll through the hallway. Then a scrich scrach sound started. Then my teacher said, "Ah, It's too noisy." Then some one said about teacher's voice. "Teacher's voice is too loud" some one said. Then teacher said "But you can hear me great right? No one hated my voice." Now, hear carefully Ji-woo said "I hate your voice teacher." What a crazy and rude thing. Stroy number two: It was the same math time. Remember that Ji-woo said "I hate your voice teacher." ? Then teacher said if you hate my voice go to third class room. It was all joke you know. But Ji-woo think it was real. And he pack his bag. It was joke too, but it makes lots of heartbrakes too teacher. 답변자 tc0073 답변일 2012-09-17 답변내용 Today I went to school. >>Good sentence! I have to go to school because that I am a student. >>I have to go to school because I am a student. (unnecessary word) Today I want to talk about my friend Ji-woo. >>Good sentence! He is my best friend. >>Good sentence! He acted weird today. So I want to tell you about this story. >>He acted weird today, so I want to tell you about this story. (sentence construction) Story number one: It was math time. >>Good sentence! Our teacher was teaching us Math of course. >>Good sentence! Then a cart roll through the hallway. >>Then a cart rolled through the hallway. (verb tense) Then a scrich scrach sound started. >>Then a screech scratch sound started. (spelling) Then my teacher said, "Ah, It's too noisy." >>Good sentence! Then some one said about teacher's voice. >>Then some one said something about teacher's voice. (intended message) "Teacher's voice is too loud" some one said. >> "Teacher's voice is too loud" someone said. (someone is one word) Then teacher said "But you can hear me great right? No one hated my voice." >>Good sentence! Now, hear carefully Ji-woo said "I hate your voice teacher." >> Now, listen carefully to what Ji-woo said "I hate your voice teacher." (intended message) What a crazy and rude thing. >>Good sentence! Stroy number two: It was the same math time. >>Good sentence! Remember that Ji-woo said "I hate your voice teacher." ? >>Good sentence! Then teacher said if you hate my voice go to third class room. >>Then teacher said if you hate my voice go to the third class room. (lack of article) It was all joke you know. But Ji-woo think it was real. And he pack his bag. >>It was all a joke you know but Ji-woo thought it was real and he packed his bag. (verb tense) It was joke too, but it makes lots of heartbrakes too teacher. >>it was a joke too but it caused my teacher's heart to break. (sentence construction) Thanks for writing! I had fun reading it.